I was embarrassed by the fact that Kururo and the others were looking for a way to stop the pks. it's noble on their part, but it's no longer an ordinary game but a death game.

they are pk, killers hardened for the most part. players like Poh, Xaxa, Johhny Black would not be easy to stop. in case of meeting would Kuruko ans his friends would be able to kill too?

during the raid launched by the clearers, 22 members of Laughing Coffin and 11 crusaders died, although some of the crusaders were unable to kill the red players.

Kirito: you should find a way to get him to join a guild, the moonlights cats or Kuruko's guild until the end of the game. I talked to another author about him and we agreed that Kirito he alone the Gleam Eyes was impossible and stupid! not without a team to support him
and if possible save Saichi and the moonlight cats please

guilds: I think you only watched the anime, but in Sao it is impossible to officially found a guild before level 3, via a quest.
look in the wiki, it's canon.

will we see the other members of kirito's harem too? Argo, Lisbeth, Silica? :D

try to put more than third person, difficult to know who speaks sometimes.

Hey do you have an update schedule for this? Because I really like it! Also who is Shige? I haven’t seen all of kuroko no basket so... ya know?

Hey brilliant story idea but in this last bit you switched into first person could you change that please?