I love your Persuasion stories! I think it was great that Anne had the opportunity to consider another proposal for her sense of self worth and for Frederick to see how admired and sought after she was. I feel like perhaps they will go into marriage feeling a bit more equal where in the original (not dissing Austen by any means!) the feeling is that Anne is lucky that Frederick offered again if you know what I mean.

Lovely story

what a sweet story! i love persuasion so thank you.

I enjoyed this so much! Thanks for sharing it!

This was so beautiful!

I just adored this story! This is the first I have read of Persuasion fanfic and it did not disappoint! You wrote Mary well (headshake!)-indeed she would want Anne to live near so that she can be on hand anytime Mary needs company. I'm glad to see that lady Russell here at the end seemed to redeam herself. Glad she was happy about things. They really are a sweet couple. Great job! And I look forward reading many more of your stories in the future. ;-)

This chapter was riviting! LOVED IT! loved how you used original text, but in an opposite way, loved it, simply loved it. Such great writing.

What drama!

What a cliff hanger! Oh my goodness. Thank goodness the next few chapters have already been written!

Oh my goodness, this is such a great chapter! Loved the card game. I think there may be a typo near the end. I think you meant to say, "cleared his throat" not "threat".

Can't wait to read more!

Oh! The last paragraph is heart wrenching!

I'm really enjoying this!

yess anne!

I enjoy so much this love story. Thank you for good written story.

I enjoyed reading this and I hope your newborn daughter or son sleeps the night away.