| Reviews for Natsu: Rise of a Legend |
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   yudhazebba chapter 6 . 1/22 Next |
| vaporizer chapter 1 . 6/14/2019 hope you continue this story |
| the Abyss titan chapter 6 . 5/23/2019 will this story continued it is pure gold |
| the Abyss titan chapter 6 . 5/23/2019 will this story continue it is pure gold |
| Silverman1212 chapter 1 . 5/14/2019 damn this is a great story , loving it so far . please give us more chapters soon . |
| erasenpai946 chapter 6 . 3/26/2019 Does this story continue? |
| Dr1zzy chapter 6 . 10/15/2018 Good start |
| jp chapter 6 . 10/9/2018 you naruto name mix with natsu in with line i rewrite if i were you |
| MrSunshine744 chapter 6 . 10/9/2018 thanks for the update, good to see your still writing the story, can't wait to see natsu or mira beat the tar out of erigor! |
| rufus264 chapter 1 . 9/19/2018 Great Fanfic |
| Rebmul chapter 5 . 7/12/2018 interesting I think there is only one other fic I read that he is married before the start of cannon I cant remember if its to mira or erza |
| NinjaFang1331 chapter 5 . 5/13/2018 nice update |
| Lordlexx chapter 3 . 4/30/2018 Quite a few spelling mistakes in this chapter. Make sure you do a bit of proofreading if you don't have a beta reader. You should employ the use of some sort of line break when you have a location change or time skip. It helps make the read less confusing. Natsu being OP is fine, but for that just means your gonna have to do something to make future fights worthwhile or put some sort of seal on him to limit himself. Him training Mira is an obvious thing, but swordplay isn't something I'd include in that. Just doesn't seem very Mira-like. Speaking of training, don't leave the rest of the guild behind, but they don't need any of the soul reaper stuffs, just general training if they want. I imagine Erza wouldn't take her loss that well and would frequently request a rematch. The sudden proposal after like 3 months of dating is a bit fast, but the cliche dragon love thing kinda makes up for it. Sorry for all the negativity, but I didn't see many other reviews to go off of so I thought I'd help. Your base story of Natsu inheriting Ryujin Jaka(?) is interesting, I think I've only seen one story that had it in the past and it's really old so regardless if you got inspiration from that one or not it's still something different. The fact it's a NaMi story gets you all the points. I'm curious if you're gonna include any Soul Society bits on top of parts of the original story. At any rate, keep up the great work, I'll keep reading and leave some reviews occasionally. |
| rufus264 chapter 2 . 4/27/2018 Nice chapter |
| Lazymanjones96 chapter 2 . 4/26/2018 Interesting stuff looking forward to more |
