| Reviews for Mortal Man |
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   Guiltyofmycrimess chapter 7 . 9/8 Naruto is boring even Serving tobi and training against him naruto still SUCKS ASS HE JUST KEEP'S TALKING LIKE WTF IM LOSING BRAINCELLS |
| I-Nex-I chapter 7 . 8/27 Those were actually some pretty well written combat scenes, a rare find in Naruto fics to be honest. Great work! |
| I-Nex-I chapter 6 . 8/26 Love AUs, so not a problem for me. Really liked the continuous callbacks to how Naruto saw Sasuke shrugging in an earlier chapter as well |
| I-Nex-I chapter 1 . 8/26 I really like the cliche flips at the beginning, with Konan being exasperated by Obito’s plan instead of immediately being on board, and the Akatsuki members not suddenly turning into wonderful and kind people that just needed a child to brighten their lives. |
| AkashimaUchiha chapter 7 . 7/14 What is Zetsu in this fic? Since you don't want to go Kaguya route... And who convince Nagato about the infinite tsukuyomi in the end since Obito didn't even wanna go with the plan itself now? It's just a bit confusing to take the main antagonist out of the key without proper replacement. |
| The Dark Sapphire chapter 2 . 7/13 Thats pathetic if he's 12 years old and barley chunin rank given his special abilities and training by multiple S-rank ninja. Kakashi became a Jounin at 10 and he was a normal person. |
| Uchiha Arashi chapter 7 . 6/26 I appreciate the long-ass chapter |
| FlameXvenom chapter 3 . 6/24 Wow! Great Fic. Really like your writing idea. I can usually tell where most fics are heading in by the first couple of chapters, but this one is constantly keeping me guessing! Please update more! |
| draculyn28 chapter 6 . 6/6 good chapter |
| laurajustin chapter 6 . 6/4 Great story! Can't wait for the next update! |
| draculyn28 chapter 5 . 4/30 very good story, I hope to see what happens later, greetings. |
| biginferno chapter 5 . 4/18 interesting so far will this be Naruto X Yugito or is it to change your description says Naruto x Yugito but chapter 1 says that pairing or another and if others are being considered I'd like to suggest Naruto X Tayuya or Naruto X Samui |
| Guest chapter 5 . 4/18 Amazing fic, be nged it just now Please Please PLEASE! Fu not yugito :( |
| thunderofdeath97 chapter 5 . 4/18 Welp done woth this |
| Meazm chapter 4 . 1/8/2019 Interesting story. Make this NarutoxYugito. Update fast! |
