Reviews for Great Responsibility
carl9390 chapter 4 . 2/17
I allways had the idea that Peter would have helped the younger generation heroes like Miles and Kamala by offering them internships to cover for their hero activities along with giving them the opportunity to work together under experienced heroes
Batguy01 chapter 22 . 2/16
Glad to have this story back, for a while I thought was dead.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/29/2019
Could use some fixing for repeated words, wrong spacings and tabs. But otherwise pretty good
Arrexu chapter 1 . 3/23/2019
I'm sorry to say this but... No... Just no. You should read a few more umm better fanfics where they don't write "Peter Parker in his brain" right off the bat. After you do that rewrite this story as it does have potential. So few ever make a story of a Peter Parker who is as rich as tony. I'm glad that there even is a few including me haha. So yeah, all you need to do to entice the audience is to not overcomplicate things. Keep things simple before you attempt to write in a style you deem complicated. Trust me, a lot of us tried to do that... Anyways, best of luck!
keyblade master cole chapter 20 . 11/18/2018
Welcome back to earth 1610 miles.
Halo Star Wars X-over fan chapter 14 . 9/17/2018
I’ve kinda started to like this story especially since well it seems there’s a possibility of MJ/PP being together, however after the weird and pretty damn hard to read way you made the speaking, which is completely different from universal standard in all published 3rd person and most 3rd person FanFiction stories. But after doing what you did I can no longer continue reading simply because the way you decided to do it only makes my headache grow and become worse because of the effort it takes to understand what’s being said. Like literally there is absolutely no reason to label who the scene is centred on in the subtitle before each scene change. And secondly there should absolutely be like no reason to change to a different method of denoting who’s speaking as literally there is no reason to actually denote who’s speaking as that’s the whole point of context information sometimes, like simply saying (Peter walked into Mary’s room and mentioned/said/told her “blah blah blahas the most simplistic way of saying, of course there’s hundreds of ways of making it sound more better and sophisticated however that isn’t my point. So yeah just saying you should seriously reformat the chapters from here and on back to how the vast majority of story’s are written, as that way is much more standardized, simple and easy to read and understand, especially since the dash does significantly distracts me and causes me to reread the line they are on at least once or twice. But other then that great story. Anyways hope you fix that soon otherwise I guess I probably won’t be reading this for a while until both I’m in the mood to deal with this or when it’s not so late.
lou the winner chapter 1 . 6/26/2018
Thank you for writing this story I like it.
keyblade master cole chapter 17 . 6/27/2018
The reason Sharon like that is because she was trapped in some other dimension and she aged a little faster this was before Steve became an old man
HaywireEagle chapter 6 . 4/27/2018
Aunt Peter. LOL...
HaywireEagle chapter 1 . 4/27/2018
Spider-Man. The hyphen is important and Spidey would point that out.
Rider Paladin chapter 12 . 4/14/2018
Good luck with and congratulations on getting the job. Also, really enjoyed the sweet banter between Peter and his friends, and Teresa at the end? Looking forward to seeing where you go with her, though I'll agree that the timeline between Spectacular and Amazing is rather confusing. Personally, I tend to think the first five issues are pre-Secret Empire and starting with issue six before the Legacy numbering it shifts to post-Secret Empire. Considering that there was a rogue division of S.H.I.E.L.D. after Teresa in Spectacular, that could've easily been co-opted by HYDRA during or after Secret Empire. Just putting it out there in case you want or plan to use it, but in any event, I'm still enjoying this story immensely, so I hope you keep it up for a good while yet.
Rider Paladin chapter 11 . 4/10/2018
Hmm, yeah, I like your ideas so far. A partnership between Peter, Johnny, Tony, and the rest of the Avengers through their respective companies or corporate foundations would definitely be excellent. And yeah, I've thought for a long while that Peter and Scott would get along pretty well if they could talk to each other for a while, as they have a lot in common. Both lost their parents at young ages, both were inspired to be heroes by their father figures and held themselves responsible for said father figures' deaths, both had to deal with being heroes in a world that feared and hated them on an almost visceral level, as well as mad scientists obsessed with their DNA or obsessed with building killer robots specifically to go after them, both attracted a lot of female attention and their most iconic loves were redheads . . . I could go on. I could definitely go on. All the same, this has been a good chapter, and a good story thus far, and I look forward to reading more of it. Keep it up.
Suqu124 chapter 3 . 4/7/2018
Great work i especially enjoy Anna and johnny showing up and Parker using Anna skills to help with the fall of Parker, which was hard to read the 1st issue of arc. I understand sales is a big factor of comics but the changes in Parker's world is to random and nothing solid to enjoy tho i did enjoy the arc of worldwide. Responsibility is shown in this chapter with trying to recover data to avoid a total fallout with the company. Sad to see UBF fallout, was it just me or was captain america's speech he gave when he became leader of shield similar to Peter's speech unveiling the Uncle Ben Foundation?
Suqu124 chapter 2 . 4/7/2018
Great Responsibility is a motto for spider-man and you display it greatly in to your story. The AN i agree with due to Marvel just using spidey as a cameo to sell or improve the current series. The tie-in seems a bit off especially off time wise. Iron-man was supposed to be out of commission but we get Tony AI (TAI), Spider-man globe trotting which seems odd, and cosmic cube changing reality instead things being settled. Cap issues being settled with Steve Evil and him fighting on TV. So trust issues and blame are shifted and skipped tho Deadpool does bring the issue up again. Aftermath of secret empire seems to affect more of Peter Parker's world than any hero, besides deadpool.
Suqu124 chapter 1 . 4/7/2018
I saw the summary of this and i automatically click on read and strongly agree with what you brought out concerning some issues the series. I mostly read spidey comics due to Peter Parker and the fact that Marvel brings out more spidey comics than other series. I enjoy how you cover different bases with everything related to Parker I. Everything went by too quickly considering how long built and written for spider-man i've thought we would see more of his original characters. anyway i enjoyed the chapter and will reading the rest.
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