This is a really interesting, unique story, and its a lot of fun to read! I hope you update it again!

very interested where his relationship with Raynare goes, and surprised he managed to beat Mittelt.

lookin forward to the next update! good day to you

Finally getting to the end of the yuuma arc.

"By the way, is it really alright for you to deny this girl's freedom?"
Why the fuck did he even say that? It’s quite obvious that this line should have been followed by his death. I mean, even in our world if you’ve made some teenager your slave and someone else finds out, what would you do? Obviously, you would remove them… What did he even expect her to say?
"Oh, your right, it's not alright so now I'm going to stop. Thank you for helping me gain enlightenment on this matter."
Is he retarded? Does he want to die or some shit? Is he doing this because of morals? Morals? That won't matter to Issei when he is filled with fear of his death. How do you think humans survived to this day? Morals? Pfft, do you not see moral people killing others to save their asses on the news?
His sense of self-preservation is ridiculously low, practically non-existent. If he was born in the past, he wouldn't live past the age of 9 after he attempts to save people from an amoral ruler or something. Clearly, he is a failure as a sentient being.

Huh nice nice

Hmmmmmmm it's nice but yeah hmmmm I don't know what to say but yeah

Phhahahahahahhah nice nice

Well this is nice

Hi I like this story so far. Really like the issei/yuuma ship.
Just a few confusing points for me:
In chapter 3 why didn't issei remember that yuuma's school uniform (and school) was fake and...
In chapter 4 when issei comes home from that dungeon why was issei sad when yuuma didn't care about his wounds. I mean she wasn't at his house

That's all I found off. Hope you keep writing more. Cheers

You should mix in elements from different anime or manga. EX: fate series, sword art online, bleach, the gamer, rwby, fairy tail, naruto, harry potter, god of highschool, tokyo raven, or even games.

I would have put some of those extra points un LCK... just to be sure. Then, try to not break this record of procastinating for 10 weeks and upload often when you have time (that's important). By me, my record is about 4 months, gove or take two weeks.

Why did Issei didn't try to subdue her? Also, how the hell he managed kept her talking. When he's gomna get into a real fight anyway? Looking at this version of Issei is like looking at poor Yamcha only this Yamcha is hella more weak

Huh, butterfly effect.

Good