This was really cute! Once again, I enjoyed the banter between Harry and Kingsley. The way you characterize Harry is quite fun, and I loved the parts about him being a great uncle and even mattress surfing with the kids. That really added something extra to the story.

It was nice to see little snippets of their relationship progressing, and I enjoyed how it was clear how they felt about each other before either of them actually confessed anything. There were a couple times where I actually wondered if they were already together only to keep reading and realize they weren't. I think you did a good job with their chemistry and showing how much they cared for each other.

I also enjoyed how there were a lot of light-hearted moments but also some sadder ones, such as when Harry was hurt and in the hospital. It created a full picture of what their relationship was like. It was sweet.

Wow this story is so good ! Thanks for this moment of sweetness

I’m crying that’s so cute

HarryKingsley is definitely interesting. I want more, honestly. I love the easy banter that the two of them share. It reminds me a lot of Garcia and Morgan from Crimind Minds and I'm always here for that.

Kingsley is just bae here, okay? Like he deserves all of the happiness. I approve of Minister Kingsley so much. And Kingsley staying by Harry's bed when he was injured is just pure love. I know Harry's oblivious, but come on! He can't be that oblivious. Okay, well, canon says yes he can, but I hoped it would get better with time.

Harry finally Gryffindoring up and telling Kingsley how he feels is wonderful. Like, good job, Harry. You did something.

Oh, yeah, the motorcycle. Man, I now need a fic where Harry takes Kingsley on a ride on his motorcycle. For reasons, obviously. I fucking laughed at the "no murder" part of the dialogue. Like A there.

This was just fun. I like fun.

I loved Harry and Kingsley's manors in this piece - they were far more entertaining than in canon. Personally, I’d never pictured them together, but they actually seemed to work really well in your story.

The flirty teasing that was woven through the story was very funny, and gave the story a lighthearted air that I think was suited perfectly to the two characters.
The innuendo was witty and funny without being crass and overdone, so well done there (I think I just congratulated you on your innuendo writing skill (cwl) )

The choice to begin and end the story in a similar way was a good one, and I liked how you showed Harry and Kingsley’s character growth - it made them into interesting and three dimensional people.
I loved the last line, it’s poetic peaceful nature was a perfect contrast to the rest of the story.

okay I won't lie my first reaction was basically '... okay wtf is this pairing?' (cwl) But I actually liked it? Who knew, right? :p
"I have a plan." "No murder." "I don't have a plan." - Your Harry is a murderous little shit and I love it (cwl) I know it was the prompt but it's even better to see it used (cwl)
I love post-war stories but I loved that this was lighter than most angsty fics I've read/written. It makes for a nice change of pace, and I loved it. Plus, the banter/flirting between Kingsley and Harry was hilarious and I loved it :)
'who's cock' - I think it's supposed to be whose here? And there were some wild commas that distracted me a little bit from your story. Apart from those, all good though :)
Nice work!
Cheers! :)

I AM HAVING A LOT OF EMOTIONS?

Okay like I already have a lot of feelings about Kingsley who needs more love but like
KingsleyHarry?

Why do you do this to me why do you make me feel these things

THEY'RE SO CUTE? THEY'RE SO FULL OF SASS? THEY'RE SO PERFECT? and the ending is so soft and heart melty and
ALSO I FUCKING LOVE THAT DIALOGUE WITH THE NO MURDER/I DO NOT HAVE A PLAN AND YOU'VE USED IT SPECTACULARLY AND I LOVE IT?

honeslty tho sassy harry gives me life and you write sassy harry beautifully.

AWKWARD HARRY BRINGS THE GIFT OF SCONES

GRUMPINESS AND MATTRESS SURFING

It started with/it ended with : okay i fucking love how this comes full circle with the style and the SCONES

idk i can't words just fuck you you're too great

You know how much I love Kingsley, so I enjoyed this! I love how you opened it with “it started” and ended it with “it ended”. The repetition works well.
Spot on sexual innuendo! I cracked up at the mattress surfing line and the dry spell one. Harry is indeed a shit, but it is part of his charm.

I’m an absolute sucker for tender yet subtle moments, so I loved when Kingsley warmed Harry up and Harry leaned into him. Also, Kingsley staying with Harry while he recovered and telling him he’s more important tugged at my heartstrings.

You’ve written their relationship well, mixing in playfulness with more serious moments and confessions. I see Harry as someone who’d have a hard time admitting his feelings, which let to him hiding the relationship. I’m glad that he eventually told Kingsley how he felt. And of course, Kingsley reciprocated. How could he not?

The last section with “it ended” starting every sentence makes me think they grew old together and passed away. If that’s your intent, thanks for making me feel all the things. I’ll just read it as the end of them hiding their relationship.

Overall, this was an excellent look into their relationship and how it progressed over time. Nice job!

That was perfect.

That was perfectly adorable! Very well written. Thank you for sharing.

Loved it, but seriously wish it was longer! It is so hard to find a good Harry/Kingsley couple story, actually it’s hard to find a good Harry/Kingsley story at all lol. Must look for a story community for them!

This was awesome..love this pairing but it’s so very rare.