Ny heart just shattered into a million pieces and it will never be whole again.

Oh come on...squint

My poor heart. its breaking (Д)
This was amazing, you've done well.
It was heartbreaking to read, I hoped it'll end on a happy note, but no.

Good job mdelpin. I am genuinely crying, and that's not something that's easily done. When you mentioned "a mate rights all wrongs," I was expecting a last second happy ending, but nope.

It was cute and heartbreaking all at once. It's so good, but my fucking heart.

ahhhhhhhh! my poor heart! it was so great though but my poor babies! ow. just *screams*. i wish i could offer more feedback but ahhhhhhhh! it was very good! broke my poor heart but amazing!

whaaaaattt! no i cant believe natsu died poor gray. i loved this story though