tu historia es buena puedes continuarla

Good read, cant wait for the next chapter it has been about a year and a half so im assuming it is close to being done.

Great story waiting for the next chapter with anticipation but understanding that with the way you have so many devil fruits and ways to use them that it takes a while for new chapters especially with the length of the previous ones.

This fic is just a rehash of canon and nothing more, this is awful! Why cant I find original One Piece fics? Why is it always following canon material goddamit.

This fic has soooo many levels of cringe.

Damn, this story is something else. Gotta give it a solid 9.7/10, and that's only because I'm hesitant to give anything a rating above that.

Several points for this chapter in particular: Didn't see Zoro and Kuina's, ah, relationship with each other coming, but I ship it. The introduction of King Kong as the Mad Bomber and Diddy's brother was great, Bartolomeo's interactions with Luffy and decision to go to sea was well-done, and I admit that my jaw dropped at the implication about friggin' Admiral Sakazuki being Smoker's dad.

Also, the omake with the Charlotte daughters talking about Luffy's...capabilities...had me in stitches.

I only hope that someday you might return to this story.

This is the second time i read this novel and I DONT READ A NOVEL TWICE and i will say it again this is the best one piece fanfic novel out there great writing still great build up great theories and great every thing around I hope one day you will continue this novel it is worth it and thank you for the hard work so far

Reading the Devil Fruit analysys discussion gave me this horrible idea that the reason devil fruits are so cancentrated in the Grand Line may be caused in part due to Impel Down. It holds the vast majority of dangerous pirates and criminals (ie alot of devil fruits outside of WG control) sitting on the edge of the Grand Line which can explain the consentration. Conspiracy could claim it as a failed collections facility with the top floor of the (huge) building being an orchard that failed due to poor growing weather conditions for the vast number of plants/fruit. I like the thought process.

Having read and re-read this story many times because I enjoy it so much, seeing these notes about the potential addition of Nojiko to the crew and the Size Fruit makes me realize that she and Yosaku would have been the perfect team along with Brook and Pedro to steal the Poneglyph from Big Mom during the Whole Cake Island Arc. Little tangent aside, I love your work and I look forward to your next updates. I'm sure they'll be great as ever.

This was incredible , so so good, wish there was more.

Nami not getting a fruit ?

This is my jam , so over engineered, but in a good way ,so well written love his non human crew mates , the only thing that irks me is the armament Haki problem , I know you wrote about why earlier but I just don’t understand why you would give him that handicap, hopefully I will get over it because everything else is just how I like it , can’t wait to read on !

nice fict

Aw it one of the best one piece SI story that I read I really want to know what happen.

This. Is. So. Awesome! How could you stop? This is one of the best fanfiction I have ever read. And normally I don't like it if a normal person is reincarnated as Luffy but this is just so AWESOME! Especially the way Luffy can explain how to weaponize even the weakest of the paramecia devil fruits. Please don't stop.