i love this story i hope u continue it

Hi. It’s been almost a year since your last update so I don’t expect you to pick this story back up. I just want to say I really enjoyed reading it. I don’t really know what to write. But authors thrive with reviews and comments. Keep writing, even if it’s not this story, cause you’re a great author.

I hope to see a new chapter for this story.

Good to read please update soon I want to read more

Depending on how you want to proceed with the story I feel you should change a couple details of Marco and how royalty/lordship are handed out like for example Marco is a black belt another idea Marco is given a chance to get his own pair of scissors and to meet hekapoo earlier Marco accidentally completets a ancient challenge set forth by a forgotten Kingdom that was built upon the blood moon theme witch is to get bring down saint Olga's school and the mark of lordship is a soul bound weapon like sword version of thors hammer

You may have add in to much 30 year old Marco he a bit too grounded .I almost thought he steal Janna's hat or panties for taking his seeing as it a M story that can just happen later.

Wonder how his hekapoo trial will go? keep up the good work.

this was good glad to see marco with some character development and so far so good with Tom but I do wonder how they will react meeting his sister *shakes in terror*

dude, I'm in love with this and can't wait to read more! please keep it up, because I honestly want to read a whole bunch of this.

dude amazing story you got here

So Tammy is the clingy one in this fic. Would be fun to see her schemes...

This was awesome and Tammy was funny

So Tammy now has an interest in marco. This will be interesting. keep up the good work.

I like what youve written so far. Characters are good and your writing is solid.

I liked the interactions between characters, Marco being so meticulous and sneaky, and just the general premise of the story. I would say you dont even need to credit me since this really is your own take on things.

My only advice would be dont be afraid to really get creative and go off the beaten path. Youve made a good divergence from canon and my suggestion is to keep riding that wave. Also I would suggest slightly longer chapters, but thats just me. I like long chapters in general.

Keep up the good work.

I read you story it’s great so far are you going to be fallowing the story or going a different way. Since the blood moon ball is a big deal in the show.