Reviews for Relic of the Future
Chainthatbinds chapter 74 . 7/21
I'm not really one for romance despite my fic history but this chapter was done right. some light comedy here some dam nere heartbreak there and to top it of a few hart warming moments and a little bit of hellish/heavenly comedy
Papa Tater chapter 1 . 7/21
I found an error in chapter 98 with the follow exchange. Not sure if it will impact the future story as this is about as far as I've gotten.
I do believe Mrs. Adel attended the ASH gym and should be aware of who emerald is. This exchange causes me confusion.

"Velvet! Velvet!"
"Friends of yours?" Coco asked her partner as they hurried up.
"Emerald is the daughter of the man who taught me how to fight," Velvet replied with a smile. Coco nodded and relaxed, seemingly content with them talking. "Hello Emerald. Is this your partner?"
TheSlySage chapter 115 . 7/20
interesting I look forward to seeing behind the door
Guest chapter 115 . 7/20
Yes
Guest chapter 115 . 7/20
To Iluvgrace420 FAN are you really trying to promote a writer who has written some shitty Naruto x RWBY futa shit.
Chainthatbinds chapter 46 . 7/20
just got the kingdom of amalur reference
JemDragons chapter 115 . 7/20
I don't know what you're expecting, buddies, but it's not going to go well for you
Guest chapter 114 . 7/19
Am I the only one to notice this but Summer said “their daughter”, the their part being in reference to Summer and Qrow and the daughter being Ruby. This is in reference to Summer reacting to Oscar arriving. I don’t know if that was intentional or not, or I’m reading wrong, but it would be kinda inconsistent if it was intentional. I don’t mind it, cause I’m a fan of the Qrow is Ruby’s father theory, but everything that was said so far in the story, leans otherwise. Just a little confused here.
LL the Phantom chapter 115 . 7/19
The Guest below me is definitely a child or worse a man child, I pity them
Dalumbr chapter 115 . 7/19
So um, does Summer know how to use her eyes here or is that still unknown to her?
Guest chapter 115 . 7/19
Jaune should Know That Family Meant Little To Her. She did kill her daughter's and huaband after all.

As Long as she Does Not Value the Life of Others the Curse of immortality would never be lifted..
SardonicEffigy chapter 115 . 7/19
YOU CANT HANDLE THE TRUTH... *cough* sorry...

Im looking forward to the next couple chapters but also that vacation time. I've always been a fan of some of that soft character driven interaction and I'd love to see some more of it. Especially between Jaune, Emerald, and Vernal.
Guest chapter 115 . 7/19
Jesus fucking Christ... This is the worst fucking thing I've ever READ. How the fuck can you be in your damned THIRTIES and write like a FOUR YEAR OLD WITH BRAIN DAMAGE!?
I could write a 300-page essay that details how awful this story is and the relentlessly awful ways it is told, but I'm just going to quote one of my friends, who somehow managed to read through about ten chapters of this garbage:
"'How the fuck did this fic last past this chapter?'"
...Is a thought that I've had for each of the last eight chapters. And it keeps getting worse. And it's hard to figure out what part is the worst because it's all the worst."
Really, it's hard to break it down any further than that.
To anyone who's going through the reviews: Please. Do yourself a favour and STOP. Every paragraph of this revulsing scum penned down by an even worse scum atrophies your body and ACCELERATES THE DEATH OF YOUR NEURONS.
Instead, you should read the fics made by those wonderful people:
I luvgrace420
Troumvirate
Kream45
Mr grimjaw
Those guys are thousands of orders of magnitude above Coeur. Give their stories a try.
AND KILL YOURSELF COUER. I FELT SO HAPPY WHEN YOUR DOG DIED, I HOPE YOUR MOM'S CANCER RELAPSES AND KILLS HER TOO YOU DISGUSTING PIG!.
gordhanx chapter 115 . 7/19
Good job on Summer's reaction, to getting full confirmation on Ozpin's deeds. I'm glad we get to explore that here, since it was mostly glossed over last time, and I really liked what we got. And it was also a good place, for them to talk some more about old Oz. It's more establishment in how, despite all his paranoia and distrust, they all want the same thing as him and shouldn't blame him too badly. We've had talks like this before, but the dynamic between Summer & Jaune, still made it work. And it felt justified, considering Summer's new realization. And we also get a small discussion between Oz & Qrow, about Jaune's loyalties. And I'm really glad how despite Qrow's loyalty to Oz, he still sticks up for his friend, despite his mentor's distrust.

And it's time for another sweet Emerdal/Jaune moment. It's was as wonderfully adorable as ever, with some cute moments with the rest of her team thrown in as well. Even if the kids aren't the main focus, this little bit with them, was much appreciated. Plus, it was fun having Ashari discover Sun's new affections towards his daughter rather than Emerald. And of course, loved the bit with Zwei unlocking his Aura. Great bit of comedy. And, after a nice little scene with Glynda & Jaune, really liked seeing him explain his methods to her, he & Summer set off on their search, to the temple they were told off a while ago. And with all the build up to it, and an implied monster lurking inside it, I'm definitely looking forward, to whatever might be waiting for them.
Guest chapter 115 . 7/19
Come on if a Normal Perosn like Me Know That Summer and Jaune could be walking into a trap.. Then Surely They Must Know it might be A Trap. Lol
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