Reviews for Ghost In Gotham
multyfangirl21 chapter 4 . 7/21
Grr. A cliffhanger.
I wonder how long it will take Danny to notice anything in his now bugged apartment. And I wonder if the bats will hear anything interesting before then.
Then again Bruce and Damian (?) Might be annoyed that they can't find much if anything before Danny showed up in Gotham.
boi chapter 2 . 5/24
its good to be rebellious at times as long as it doesnt go to far like say... murder?
boi chapter 1 . 5/24
spoopy
LetTheChaosEnsue chapter 4 . 7/6/2019
I don’t suppose you could continue? I really like where this is going!
HalfafanD chapter 4 . 4/27/2019
Which Robin? Dick? Jason? Tim? Sounded like it’d either be Tim or Dick?
freefall-gypsy chapter 4 . 4/26/2019
Again thank-you there are some spelling mistakes but right now I'm to sick with a cold to trawl through and help point them out.
freefall-gypsy chapter 3 . 4/25/2019
I know this hasn't updated in 1 year and 16 days but there is still hope right?
GraceTheAuthor chapter 2 . 4/20/2018
There's some comma-happy instances in it so far, you forget to type a word every now and then, but I do the same thing sometimes. Other than that it's really enjoyable. Good work, I Know you will improve.
16ckelmen chapter 3 . 4/10/2018
"We got you now, Ghosty! the guy officer said... you need to end the quotation and capitalize t.
"Wake up, Sam. Aren't we supposed to be both heroes?" I think this should be changed to; "Wake up, Sam! Arent' both of us supped to be heroes?" Although, it feels weird for an officer to say that, but oh well.
I have spotted more mistakes!
I want to say Sam (officer) is at the hospital... great work! I suggest rereading your work or running it through a beta. Good Luck!

P.S. I also have trouble correcting my own work
~16CRK
16ckelmen chapter 2 . 4/10/2018
...And Ghosty trikes again" I caught a mistake!
Cyroclastic chapter 3 . 4/10/2018
oooo nice
PhantomGoat13 chapter 3 . 4/9/2018
This story is going well, looking forward to the next update!
WaYaADisi1 chapter 3 . 4/9/2018
This chapter is better on grammar than the first two which is good but I think it needs a little more length to it. Other than that you're doing good.
Kari.mer chapter 2 . 3/29/2018
Story-good
Plot-good
Humor-good
Am I reviewing wrong?-probably
Either way I like the story
The fact at the end that's added it a thing no one really does but it has interest of it's own.
Few grammar things-but that's not what a review's for.
AusllyBeliever chapter 2 . 3/23/2018
I'm interested in seeing where you're taking this. It's hard to tell if it's good or bad with the amount you have written, but it's a good start!
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