Great shoot-out at the end. I also liked that your wrote Robert as the hero who saved Robert Ironside! All in all, this was a very good story. I see on the site you are holding back the next Ironside story until the "Stolen Artifact" is completed as it gives away the end. I can't wait for the next Ironside adventure!

I figured Robert would be instrumental in saving his father. Good scene at the warehouse. It was a very good story as usual. I am looking forward to the next one.

The suspense and shootout action in the warehouse was very well written. Thanks for another happy ending to an Ironside story! I'll watch for your next Ironside adventure.

Donnie Walker is grasping at his last straw. There's a lot of suspense at the end of this chapter. I'm left wondering if Robert Duvalier will help or hurt the situation since he has no idea where Ironside and the cops are. Good update!

I am just catching up. It is about time that knucklehead Kwangsoo start listing to his father-in-law. I am concerned Robert Duvalier is in trouble now too. Good update. I am waiting patiently for the next one!

It's about time that Kwangsoo finally trusts Ironside! The showdown between Billy Morton and Ironside was written very well. Now we have to hope that Robert Duvalier won't cause harm to himself or Chong Yung.

Ironside really bullied Billy Morton into telling him where Chong is being held. I wonder if Robert is going to complicate things by entering the warehouse. Looking forward to more, although it looks like this story is winding down.

What is wrong with Commissioner Randall? He should just stay out of it and let Ironside handle it. What a pain he was. Nice conversation between Kwangsoo and Ironside. Maybe now they can start building a good relationship.

With the capture of Billy Morton, will they learn where she is being held? I know you are now writing for an online magazine, but is there a chance I can nudge you to write and post the chapters sooner? Actually, when you look at the amount of chapters and words written in all four stories this past year, it is amazing you can find time to do anything else! Thanks for sharing your talent.

It's very disappointing that Randall was caving in to the media pressure to get Kwangsoo arraigned. What do they know about the case except to speculate? Now it's about time that Kwangsoo wised up enough to put his trust in Ironside's help! Good chapter - I'll wait for more info about Billy Morton being picked up!

I think this story is drawing to a end. Ironside is luring Walker where he wants him! It will be interesting to see how he does it. Thanks for sharing your talent with us!

Ironside is making his move. He is going to force Walker to lead him to Chong, at least I think so. Looks like this is coming to a head! Good Chapter!

Wow! What an update (don't know how I missed these two last chapters being posted). First of all, Commissioner Randall was using a lame excuse for taking Ironside off the case. No way to win that argument! Now the direct confrontation with Donnie Walker was a good move on Ironside's part. I'll watch closer for more chapters!

You have added a couple chapters since I last read this story. I can't believe Donnie Walker is dumb enough to pit himself against Ironside. He is going to lose, especially since he his messing with his foster daughter's life. I fell sorry for Kwangsoo, but he did bring it on himself. He should have told Ironside everything. I can't wait for more.

What doesn't that dumb Kwangsoo let Ironside help him. He is going to get his wife killed. Hopefully Ironside can find her without his help. Walker has decided to kill her so Ironside's time is limited.

Good Chapter!

Donnie Walker did indeed underestimate Ironside. It looks like he's beginning to panic due to the mess he's in. I have the feeling that he'll make even more mistakes and Ironside's team will find Chong before he can harm her any further. Good update.