Ooo I actually really like this story! Please update!

Please update! I really love this story and the way the time spots r written!

Can't wait for the next chapter really loving this story

A magnificent story line!
A gem to stumble upon

I am really looking forward to following what happens next!

Thanks for writing and sharing

This is so good!

This is brilliant keep going!

This is genius, a really well thought out story, please do not abandon this, I'm pretty sure this will turn out beautifully when finished, I trust your distinct talent, and it would be a shame to not get to know more of your version of our beloved characters, it's an excepcional take on them. I know things get hectic in life, especially in a writer's life but if it is dismotivation, please accept this review as encouragement and a reason to finish this piece because your talent may take you places should you pursue this career, I'm telling ya! It may be mostly for selfish reasons that I want you to continue the story but I wouldn't be reading your work if I thought differently. Congrats on your writing and hope you're not too far from updating it! Thank you for bringing this masterpiece to light!

Please update again soon! I love this story and hope you continue it!

New chapter was well worth the wait! I love this story and how beautifully you make their love come to life! It makes me smile so hard and my heart burst with happiness! I also love how it combines with the present day angst/righteousness and can’t wait to see what happens next!

Another great chapter! Now both of them know the prophecy... who will tell the other first? Will this help James accept Lily's 4 year absence?

The only story I've read with a similar armband plot line is Every Other Midnight by Kathryn's NomDePlume.

Man, I wanted to smack this Gilbert dude upside his head!
James is going to get all friggin' "we can't be together now! Never ever ever never, I say" isn't he? xD
aaahhh they've already lost so much time and ugh I get chest pains whenever these two aren't together :P

I think a 'previously on Closer' might be a good idea \o/ I don't have a lot of trouble remembering the details of this story because you don't leave it incredibly long between updates, but my mind is not a steel-trap either :P great job! \o/

Great chapter! I loved sirius and Remus, the two best friends James could ask for. I am also so interested in where this goes!

Really good!

Oh man, Lily's just sitting on a whole can of worms :O
and she had sex with him again without telling him anything about the prophecy :O I know they got caught up in the moment, but that's a hell of a thing to leave out :'D what if she's pregnant now?

I still feel really bad for James in this :( I feel for the both of them because Lily lost the same four years, but he's been left wondering this whole time and she expects him to understand it in a day and then she lets the new guy mess with his head even more :O it's obvious he still loves her and she got a damn tattoo to commemorate her love. if James thinks she doesn't love him, why can't she at least tell him the new guy isn't a problem? :S
I don't actually know which is worse though: not knowing for four years or knowing for four years and being unable to do anything else. I still think she could've come back. She's supposed to be the type to defy Voldemort, right? xD try some defiance, Lily :P
great job! \o/

Ah, your updates always make my day! As usual, your updates answer some questions and leave me with burning new ones! I loved the car scene with how the boys reacted to being on the highway. I also like how you emphasized that Lily was 18 when she was making the choices that led her to her decision. That is a lot to take in at 18, especially after the trauma of losing her parents.

Though I can't help but now wonder if that night in the Rover will lead to a pregnancy she was trying to avoid...