Reviews for Original Sin
kimbclar chapter 3 . 5/28
Excellent
Pidanka chapter 3 . 11/27/2019
I have a bit mixed feelings about this story. On one hand, it was interesting, unique and well written. On the other, more development of their relationship would suit this story much better imo. I know there was a word limit, but spending a few paragraphs to show their building trust, friendship and mutual need and lust for each other, until they couldn’t help it and give in would be much more gratifying than them having sex right away. It didn’t feel right, and it didn’t feel deserved.
But otherwise, I was happy to read their happy ending!
elettra21 chapter 1 . 8/18/2019
Oh my ... leaving in a very catholic country I’m very aware of all the scandals about you are telling in you story. But it’s very unusual to read about that in this
fandom. You are a very talented writer and I enjoyed very much your story.
reallyseaweed chapter 3 . 6/6/2019
i do love the happy ending.
reallyseaweed chapter 2 . 6/6/2019
oh my goodness.
reallyseaweed chapter 1 . 6/6/2019
a very interesting side of Draco in this story. oh my goodness why is this story have to be so cruel to Hermione?
Anonymous chapter 3 . 10/4/2018
So sweet. Not the rape!
MotekElm chapter 3 . 8/22/2018
I like the ending. it's HEA. I think this would have been a great story if they never had sex while Malfoy was still a priest.
MotekElm chapter 2 . 8/22/2018
I was enjoying this story until priest Draco took advantage of the situation. there's no way Hermione's character can consent to anything sexual with him after her specific horrible trauma. it's wrong.
MotekElm chapter 1 . 8/22/2018
oh. my. god. this is so good. unique!
Grahamgirl93 chapter 3 . 5/9/2018
You wrote this so well... beautiful ending..
LysL0ve chapter 1 . 3/30/2018
Amazing story very beautifuly written
Cindyrainyday chapter 3 . 3/20/2018
WOW! I probably shoudn't say this, but a priest Draco is so hot. Though I'm still sad for Hermione's past, she finally seek love, care and peace. Thanks for sharing.
Lady Danu Bear chapter 3 . 3/16/2018
A wonderful story!
Guest chapter 3 . 3/14/2018
Amazing story, very sad but with a beautiful ending.
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