Reviews for The Alpha Wolf
Guest chapter 11 . 7/2
sloppy as fuck. A king cant force a lord paramount to marry. He would lose any and all support from that kingdom. And its asking for an assfuck from the most powerful one.
Myrcella hearing that last conversation? Really? From the same Harry that throws millions of charms with a gesture? As i said, sloppy and shitty plot
Bb34 chapter 11 . 7/3
Please update.
Blackravens5 chapter 11 . 6/24
Good story, can't wait for more!
yuiop chapter 11 . 6/22
Nice
Vansmoke chapter 9 . 6/2
oh ficfix? ooc? i don't really know what actual term for it. myrcella being daughter or bastard of robert and lyanna. then whos jon's? and why not change her name for oc than use myrcella as it is canon name? i know that all will be explained in later chapters, as a suspense. but you know, this is the only story i find cersei being sane enough to cover someone's lie than her own selfish desire. and robert being compassionate with cersei because he already had a taste of lyanna (having a bastard) and not a grief stricken like canon.

it is intriguing and hopefully being different to canon you may still able to capture your audience's attention like how canon did it.
miguelgiuliano.co chapter 11 . 6/1
Espero que algún día puedas continuar con esta interesante historia.
Me agrada que la idea de un matrimonio entre Myrcella y Hadrian siga, después de todo el matrimonio entre primos es algo muy común en la época medieval.
Otro asunto a tratar es que Ashara debió quedarse muerta, no veo como ayudará a la historia ahora. Y siempre veré a Brandon-Stark como un Robert versión norteña y que Ned no tiene nada que envidiar a su hermano mayor, dado que a los 16-18 años ganó una guerra, siendo su único problema el no saber jugar el juego de tronos.
Espero que si haces otra versión de tu historia esta vez sea una de Hadrian como hijo de Ashara y Ned, incluso la idea que Ned tenga dos esposas es divertida xD, así la familia Stark tendría mucha mano de obra xD. En lo personal siento que descuidas la trama del Norte del Muro.
Eliazar Chandra chapter 1 . 5/6
If it was me I'll crucify every muggles and burn them while theyre alive. Go to the nuclear launch site and activate every single one of them and tell the whole world that this is your fault.
Warrior chapter 11 . 4/27
Great story and very well continue this and update as soon as you can.
Cheers!
LoganLiet chapter 11 . 4/8
plz skip myrcella lmao i dont like her to be with my boy
jkelly1251 chapter 11 . 4/4
Will you continue this
sagar hussain chapter 11 . 3/31
Awesome fic. Keep up the good work.
Guest chapter 9 . 1/31
The Queen knows if the Princess can to any type of injury that the King would automatically know it was her family... Even on the off chance (not likely) that it wasn't.
Guest chapter 7 . 1/31
I personally believe the Greyjoy heir should be treated like the prisoner of war he is. He deserves no money, whores, or to be a lay a bout. He definitely SHOULDN'T have been able to make 'friends ' with the Stark children, to know the castle lay out, or the secrets of the North.
tempetepapillon chapter 11 . 1/8
I truly adore your version of Harry... really well done. Thank you for sharing this
jumpingmanatee chapter 11 . 12/24/2019
Omg this is so good. I can't wait to read more of this, I hope you can update this coming year. This story is definitely worth continuing. Keep up the great work.
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