Too many holes in this story.

Good start for your story, I'm curious to see how it will go on or whether it will go on at all. I hope you and your cousin don't drop this story, even if the last update was 2 years ago. Congratulations on the 200 reviews by the way

Please consider doing the next chapter update for this.

With a bit of something, this could be a Omake or make it apart of the fic plotline, since Naruto history have been forgotten, have Naruto go about bringing it back, by making the Anime, Manga, Movies, Games, etc.

Thus bringing back his history that way, thus he will regain power, among other things, like becoming rich & etc., which might make Naruto stronger do to Fanfiction.

You can take this idea, and make it like a fun comedy & humorist.

CLIFFHANHER, BE WARNED

This is written excellently. I love all the complex stuff that you put that no one else ever bothers to explain. Any otaku (Myself included) that's worth their salt should be able to get the concepts you write, instead of having to guess and grasp at straws for explanations. I personally love how you linked the decline of modern day thaumaturgy to the quality of the mana and Od (If that weren't already known) then translating that to Naruto's use of chakra. People might see your stories as needlessly complicated, but I enjoy reading through that. I am particularly curious about Heracles being a 'distant decendant' of Naruto as you put it, so Ilook forward to the next chapter.

Awesome story. Great fight scenes. However it seems continuity is too daunting a task for you. Don't give up on it. This story has great potential. Keep at it and little by little the story will take shape.
PS. You can even partner with another good author on this.
Thanks for this gift.

Need more! Post sooon!

Your story are amazing ,even it have few you update soon...keep writing amazing story, mateXD

You should rewrite Naruto's background and make him an immortal sage wondering the Earth. Why the hell would you tether this OP Naruto to the incompetent and delusional Shirou? Even if Naruto is going to teach an insect like Shirou, an action which I don't agree with, at all, there doesn't need to be a master-servant bond between them.

he showed lancer something so he has to show saber something different? that makes no sense! that is the opposite of what a shinobi should do. keeping their abilities hidden would be something he should know how to do.

other than that though I like this story quite a bit. I hope it won't remain hon Hiatus much longer.

Please continue.

If you have him absorbing his prana from nature directly it doesn't matter if his legend is gone because he can get his powers easily, find a better nerf reason it's hard to suspend my disbelief this much.

Well, I hope that this doesn't stay on hiatus forever, because I really want to see just how much Naruto can derail the normal timeline

...wait a minute. Wouldn't Naruto have been able to sense that something terribly wrong was going on at the Matou house while in Sage mode? I mean, he was able to sense the entirety of Konoha, and notice that Kakashi wasn't there, when he was summoned back to fight Pein/Pain/Edgelord-Name; eh, I guess I'll just chock that up to him not having gotten around to it yet, as it probably hasn't even been 12 hours since he was summoned as a Servant

Anyway, other than your apparent difficulty with homophones, I'm looking forward to more of your writing sometime in the future

This was a surprisingly fun little read. Shame it’s seemingly abandoned. Ah well. Cheers, mate.

God this was good. Also with Heracles sane he might even be able to beat Gilgamesh. So when do the love interests come into play and when will he get his body back?