Awesome, incredible, brilliant, loved it!

THIS WAS THE BEST THING IVE READ IN A LONG TIME I DONT KNOW WHAT TO SAY OTHER THAN I APPRECIATE YOU FOR WRITING THIS MASTERPIECE THANK YOU AND GOOD DAY 3

Wait what are his ideas noooooo I want to knowwwwwwww
ok but seriously this was beautiful
I love how you worked the "Without the mask" theme into the last chapter it was beautiful and also omg a whole thirty seven chapters
Crystal, this is a novel. It's long enough, it's well written, it has a well planned plot etc etc
This is a beautiful work and kudos to you for sticking to it and pressing through because I know that sometimes working on this was the absolute last thing you wanted to do.
Congrats for finishing.
Congrats for capturing my attention and thank you so much.
For being a friend.
For writing this story.
For being YOU
Love you girl
Addict

*cries*
I can’t believe this is over! I loved this story, it makes me sad to see the completed sign. :’(

Wow, wow, wow. I’m speechless. U definitely nailed it. This chapters great. Again, I love the emotions, the sadness of leaving Swellview for two yrs and happiness of being united again mixed tgt, it’s just amazing. The only problem is that I’m quite curious where Henry’s parents r, coz in the story u said they sold the house, but u never mentioned them. R they killed by mist? Or r hey wif Henry and Piper?

Just can’t believe it’s over. It has been a long time and of the best stories I’ve ever read. Plz don’t stop writing and hope can see u soon.

~Zoey

I’m so sorry for this late review but a lot of things happened these few weeks. I’m having my final exam and I adopted a book called Phoenix Rising with my friend (please check it out).

I feel that this chapter is kinda rush. You used more than 30 chapters to describe a week (I think it’s a week) but you skipped a lot in only one chapter. It could be better if you describe everything in details like you did in the past. Even though, I really enjoy reading this.

I love the way how you deal with the emotions. It’s just amazing. From the first chapter to now, the emotions in this story are my favorite part. It’s just amazing how you describe them. It seems real and I can feel them. I can feel the worries when Henry is missing, and when Henry knows Piper is captured the MIST, the sadness and anger when Lynne is dead. The scene where Henry flashbacks is... I don’t know how to describe it. It makes me feel every emotions he has experienced, fear, anger, sadness, everything just come up into my mind all at once. I have no idea how you did it.

I first read this story in November and there were only 27 chapters. I can’t believe that there’s only one more chapter left. I’m not sure what will happen, but I’m sure that it gonna be amazing.

~Zoey

They should!
I agree, that’s why I try to keep my chapters roughly the same length... try.
Whoa whoa whoa whoa- FINAL CHAPTER?! ALREADY?! HOW DID THAT HAPPEN?!

OMG this is such a good story. Too bad Ray isn't hping with them, but someone has to protect Swellview. We all know that Piper is going to find out eventually. Keep writing!

WHAT FINAL CHAPTER OH GOD WHOA
Ok like i'm excited but i'm not because like... then it's done.
and then what am I going to fangirl over?
That scene with Piper and Ray was really good.
Also, I loved the scene where Charlotte loses it and starts dying laughing. It was really cute and I liked the mental picture of Henry being like, "I love you guys so much."
I really like how you emphasized how much it hurt Henry to go over the whole story, and how Charlotte was there for him. Maybe I'm just too much of a Chenry fan... but hey, it was cute and good and realistic because no one can tell a story like that without needing someone to lean upon.
Crystal, I just want to say thank you for sticking with this story... and bringing it to (almost) completion. Your faithfulness and dedication to your writing really shows. And I'm super hyped to start reading the next multi chap you're gonna pull out of your hat xD
(No seriously tho you have to write another one or I might start bawling because I need your writing in my life)

Poor Henry... I can only imagine how he feels. Good job on the writing though!

Yahhh! The code is solved finally. Good job, Charlotte!
Amazing chapter, Crystal. I love it.

Wait... gurlllllllll this is soooo good
I'm a little bit confused by the code right now... like it makes sense, but my mind obviously isn't as smart as yours so I'm still spinning
So... question... every time you wrote some of the "texts from the books" in here... was it in code?
Or was it only that one?
Cuz I was gonna say gurllll dang you good

Anyways...
I
am
so
happy
to
finally
know
the
code

Ok tho...
How does Piper not find it kind of odd that Henry's so buddy-buddy with Captain Man?
Like, it seems like she would notice /something/
idk tho
I just like my stuff to be too realistic lmao
i'm bad

I loved the emotional power you packed into Henry's statement, "I don't deserve it anymore"
That was good

WOW this was a good chapter
anxiously awaiting update :DDDDD

Yeah, doc manager be like that sometimes.
Poor Kid, but at least he’s with his friends again!
Charlotte, you, ma’am, are a genius!
Keep it short?! Are you crazy?! (Well, actually, we all are, but whatever.)

I love this story! Please update soon!

Yep, we have to make these kinds of decisions, and sometimes characters end up having to pass away in the stories. Not gonna go into detail, but I get that whole thing with the plot, we both know sometimes the characters go through so much to get to the happy ending.
That got way more sentimental than I thought it would. Anyway, you’re right; if it ain’t broke, don’t fix it!
Can’t wait to see what happens next!