Reviews for Master Dragneel
Gold Testament chapter 6 . 7/2
I hope you update this soon. It was really awesome. Specially with how Sting wanted to murder Gray for insulting the Guild Master and his mentor.
Gold Testament chapter 1 . 7/2
Bisca has a point. Pretty sure Zeref could show up open the book of END restoring the demon, and Etherious Natsu Dragneel would still sooner kill himself than hurt his lover.
Cardfighter By Maple chapter 6 . 5/25
I'm already subscribed to you story on AO3. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Guest chapter 2 . 5/24
Hey did also do a story with Cana and nastu because it's sound exactly like this just with different characters
RuthlessKill chapter 5 . 7/6/2019
UPDATE PLEASE
jackyfloresq2001 chapter 5 . 6/10/2019
CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER IN THIS STORY
Guest chapter 1 . 4/11/2019
I know you were all fired up not was, I opted to take care of you while you were out not was.
Chelsea.Dupont2017 chapter 5 . 12/19/2018
Please wright more chapters or a sequel aleast
Breizhdragon chapter 5 . 4/21/2018
why did you stop this fanfiction, I loved it and sorry for the mistakes I'm Breton and not English
Lordlexx chapter 5 . 4/17/2018
There are a few scenes that could have been worded or played out better and the grammar and spelling needs some work.. However, overall it's pretty good. Looking forward to more, NaMi is hard to come by nowadays. Speaking of NaMi, why aren't they married yet? they have a like 6ish year old daughter and didn't get married? Or are you having them put it off until the other came back?
Rebmul chapter 5 . 4/12/2018
the grammar issues from chapter one are so much better as it goes and I have to say I'm pretty sure this will become one of my all time favorite fairy tail stories.
Rebmul chapter 1 . 4/12/2018
"were" all fired up not was, while you "were" out, grimore heart and aconologia "attacked", sobs could be "heard", It dosnt really say why. I think I have made my point the story is good but you really need someone to check your work.
Linkin-Phoenix chapter 5 . 4/5/2018
This is excellent.

My only criticism would be that I don’t see what the over arcing narrative is yet. I like the pairing and how it was developed but I would like to see it expanded on more. We see the two in happy times but apart from the scene with Twilight Ogre we don’t get to see the guild struggle and i think that would be interesting. The reappearance of Tenrou could have been left for later in the story maybe once the first arc is complete.

Will we get to see a Lucy/Erza or Lucy/Lisanna pairing or even better Lucy/Lisanna/Erza pairing?

Actually that’s a question, we focused a lot of time on Natsu in chapter 5 but we don’t see Mirajane’s response to the re-discovery of Tenrou, what it might mean for her relationship and the fact that her brother and sister have been returned to her.
Deadlyshorty chapter 5 . 4/1/2018
I hope you update soon
Deadlyshorty chapter 5 . 3/25/2018
I’m loving it so far. Definitely need to fix a few grammatical errors but those don’t effect the story you are writing. I hope to read more chapter soon
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