I hope you can update this. I'm loving this concept and the pairing!

Great work here! Please update, it’s been a whole year! I really want to see you work your magic with this!

Very intense! Love how you make Korra protective! Please update!

Love the details with Toothless and Tenzin! Please update soon!

Your writing is honestly artful! Please update, it’s a waste of talent if you don’t finish this!

Those rules are going to be broken for sure! Please update soon!

Really love this so far. Really cute. Please come off of hiatus!

Hiccup's sarcasstic personality is a great addition to the new Team Avatar.

Such a cute but slightly sad start.

Okay, that is a new one. But an interesting twist. Hope this comes off of the writers block soon.

Hi! I'm just wondering when you're going to update the next chapter? It's almost been a month and I'm dying to know what happens next. Please continue with this story. Thanks!

I love it! It is very well written! Oh my goodness, it would be so cool if hiccup learned Chi Blocking! It would be cool if he learned new fighting skills and making new weapons and equipment to fight with. I can see him seeing his recent failures fighting the equalists and chiblockers and try to improve himself and adjust his fighting style to learn how to fight against chi blockers. I think he would also come up with new equipment to use against them too. I really hope you continue writing this story, I love it! Though if may make a suggestion? If you don't want to just write a kind of boring repeat of cannon, with just new characters included into the same exact storyline like some people do with crossovers. Try to make this story different from cannon. Have the similar major plot points as the cannon, but change the path to them. Write and plot twists, so we don't know what is going to happen before you do it. It makes things a lot more interesting. I can give you an example, Hiccup sees his failure and starts to research chi blocking and learns how to fight them. He also immediately starts making armor and equipment that would neutralize chi blocking and electrical strikes, and bolas while still remaining flexible and easy to handle in battle. Plasma bombs, a sticky gun or bola gun or net gun or electric nets or darts, something that can hamper the chi blockers flexibility and maneuverability at range. He could also have razors that can flip out his suit and free him from bolas immediately if he gets tied up. Oh and what be really cool is a plasma gun using toothlessess gas as fuel and ammo. I think he should also have a sword like inferno, with an added electric shock feature.

Also you could have a side plot of hiccup researching and looking for clues using his status as a no bender to hunt down anon and the equalised, you could have Hiroshi turn back too good after something happens that makes him realize his mistake, like maybe a equality or nonbender tries to hurt asami or hums and a bender saves her life. Don't follow cannons progression of the Equalist arc, but create your own! Just keep amon and the equalise as the villains but have the way things happen be different. It would definitely be interesting!

Aww... I'm just imagining an 8 year old hiccup and hatchling toothless. That whole scene was seriously cute.

Nice I like it! Fresh idea with tenpin adopting hiccup

Love this story a lot, please, please, PLEASE CONTINUE!