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Tis good

Hi, in your second chapter a lot of dissertation

Your story is hard to understand but when you do it's poetry in story form

IM TRYING NOT TO CRY INTO MY DINNER RIGHT NOW BECAUSE THIS CHAPTER WAS HEARTBREAKINGLY BEAUTIFUL GOSH I FORGOT HOW MUCH I LOVE YOUR PROSE AAAAAAAAAAAA THANK U SO MUCH FOR UPDATING

Harry and Loki mixed up with each other to make it sometimes impossible to find out whose memories are flashing.

I don't know what to say, but this is it, chief.

I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.

So, Harry will be continuing his roaring rampage of revenge on the Death Eaters & Voldemort in the next chapter? I would like to see Draco and Lucis die next. Snape too if he is a villain in this. Ohh he should kill Narcissa first so that they feel that pain as well like how they killed Lily.

omfg i cried. i really really like this, it's so brutal and lovely. more please!

Good story

Awesome chapter, but if this story goes forward I feel the writing style has to change a bit. Please continue, I'm loving this story.

wow. seriously amazing work, i’m loving the confusion of harry/loki, can’t wait til he moves into the avengers world and see how he works.

good to see this was not abandoned.

Mooooooooreeeeeee... Please continue

Love this please continue.