Reviews for Time Travel? What The Fuck?
iTyncWithReality chapter 2 . 19h
lol! the introductions were fantastic!
gonzalo.flako chapter 42 . 7/21
Muy buena historia aunque me tomo 3 días en leer ya que tuve que volver al trabajo ya que es esencial como en el área de la agricultura. Pero amigo sería interesante leer un naruto x Karin para conservar el clan uzumaki más puro, no crees. Espero que actualices pronto
HTTYDGuest chapter 42 . 7/21
I LOVE THIS STORY, PLZ UPDATE SOON
HTTYDGuest chapter 23 . 7/21
YOU HAVE A TUMBLR, TOO? HOLD ON, LEMME FOLLOW YOU
Isaac chapter 31 . 7/19
I LOVE THIS STORY
jon reeve chapter 29 . 7/16
/The nerf is strong in this one.

/You want to write a strong Sakura, cool, but weakening the other two to do it is not the way. 'If the only way for you to feel tall is for everyone else to be on their knees...'

/You empower Sakura, you nerf Sasuke, and then you nerf Naruto worst of all. They're all screaming their techniques, so ignoring that that is a dramatic technique for the manga/anime genre, he heard Orochi yell that he was performing a seal. Then Orochi jabbed five fingers onto Naruto's seal. Then Naruto lost access to Kurama's chakra, which comes from the seal. Naruto's not that fucking dumb, especially when he's literally experienced this before. He lived with his seal modified by Orochi untul Jiraiya fixed it like a week or two after the exam.

/You have Sasuke acting like a little bitch whenever Sakura throws her bitchy fits, which he didn't do in canon. I can see it's for humor, but it's unbalanced humor that doesn't match the characters. Having Naurto act that way wouldn't be outside the norm at all. Having Sasuke do it, especially when you go to lengths to show that they had not even reconciled yet, makes no sense.

/Y'know, I'm not even about to sit up here and try to itemise the bullshit in this story and especially this chapter. I know from the words I use this might sound angry, but I'm actually more annoyed than anything else.

/I've read Sakura-centric stories. Some nerfed the other characters to a degree, but it was actually pretty rare in the stories I read. A lot of them were able to make her badass without dimming Naruto's light. However, even if they did nerf characters, that's somewhat expected when you shift protaganists like that.

/This is supposedly a Team 7 fic (or is it? Maybe you mentioned somewhere that this is about Sakura instead), but it is looking more like a Sakura fic with bad window dressing.

/There was just so much wrong with the logic you used in this fight, and throuhhout this entire fic. It was somewhag apparent before, but this chapter crystalizes where you want to stand with this, and it is not in a good place. At least not for me.

/Again, if this was listed as Sakura-centric, I'd have probably just shrugged and read on(The fic image kinda clued me in, but sometimes the fic image has little to nothing to do with the direction of the fic). This is just very disappointing as a whole.
Iam chapter 42 . 7/16
Please update
Guest chapter 42 . 7/16
This story' really amazing
jon reeve chapter 18 . 7/15
/D'aww. Plus sarcasm, too!
jon reeve chapter 16 . 7/15
/Heh, Sasuke's adorable. Huh, not something I'd thought I'd ever say in a non kid!fic. Or does this still count as a kid!fic?
jon reeve chapter 11 . 7/15
/Huh, the powerup Naruto never got in canon. Funny how many people are intent on correcting that error.
jon reeve chapter 10 . 7/15
/Yeah that was a pretty large rock jutsu Sasuke launched from his glass house.

/A lot of people seem to dislike this chapter due to Sakura bossing the boys around. I'm kinda split, because she has to do something productive, and she's pretty uselss in most other cases. At the same time, making those two submit to her was weird.
jon reeve chapter 5 . 7/15
"I don't know what to do."

/Damn these blurry phones screens. When are they going to fix that feature?
jon reeve chapter 2 . 7/15
/Wow, that is much less annoying than 'Believe it!,' and much more consistent with Japanese culture in-jokes. Why have I not seen that before?

/Fandom, you have failed me! ... up until this point. That alone makes me want yo read this.

/Will we actually see Sakura pinch Naruto's cheek? Inquiring minds want to know.
Elizabeth loines chapter 42 . 7/14
Please update
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