I loved this

Good chapter just waiting for the next

and here I thought I was original with the whole black mamba faunus thing. good job

That was actually really cool. You know a snake was used to trick Eve but a snake was also used to heal the Israelites during the Exodus, snakes have been used to both save and damn many people.

Oh I REALLY hope this story is continued! I wanna see more Snake Jaune here!

I like the story, it has a lot of potential to be a real attention grabber. Look forward to the next chapter.

loved this first chapter hope to read more soon keep up the great work hope to read more soon!

I can see a bite coming sooner or later it's just a matter of who gets it?

I choose Blake for the pairing if it's not harem that is.

I'm glad Jaune didn't take Weiss's crap, I never did understand what the hell he saw in her, all she ever did was treat him like crap, not mention she was mean to Ruby his first friend at beacon, I just can't see how Jaune had any feelings for her especially with how she acted.

Ok this is very different, but I like the concept.

This os really good. Can’t wait to read more.

too bad he isn't a belcher sea snake

so each snake faunus has a different venom? That makes curing the victim harder

Cool first chapter but I don't think blake would be a good leader