This story is Great! Please keep writing, I can't wait to see what you come up with.

There is a problem with this chapter, check it. (a lot of 'font-size' and numbers, etc. added to the text)

You talented being
You can provoke feelings with words
I'm already in love

i ship it

I love ya u genius

This relates to me so much
It's 2 am and I'm here
and my parents wouldn't let me name the kitten alois
or the big black one bassy
i love you with a passion

I love it plz write more

I love this chapter! I can't wait for Grell to appear in the story. Thanks for the chapter. Keep up the good work!

Hope you update soon

I love this story! I can't wait for the next chapter!

The writing quality is good in terms of your spelling and grammar, but the following part of the Content Guidelines is broken for being a second person or you-based story:

Entries not allowed:
5. Any form of interactive entry: choose your adventure, second person/you based, Q&As, and etc.

Please remove all elements related to the reader such as "(H/L)" and replace them with any canon character or original character. Switch to the first person or third person point of view. You can always put it on another site where it's allowed like deviantART.

Love this story please continue.