Please can you update and continue this story.

Aww this was such a cute chapter

This is a great chapter filled with intrigue, emotions, compassion and love. America has always got Maxon back and support him in every way that she can. I love the way you bring in the idea of the children not being able to call Lady Brice Aunt but they will get to know her well. The end of the chapter sums how deeply America and Maxon love each other. Thank you for the update I
look forward to the next chapter.

That was worth waiting for such lovely inaction between lady Brice and King Maxon. I love the way you gave the details of theirs first meeting it was emotional and makes you want to cry. The way King Maxon put lady Brice’s Mother in her place was great. Looking forward to the next update

Hi it’s been a while since we had a update of this wonderful and intriguing book. Please don’t give up on us can you update and finish. It is such a please to read your excellent writing.

I hope that everything is alright you have not updated for a while. Hope we hear from you soon.

Your writing is so realistic and powerful. You bring out the emotions in Maxon so well and America knows just the right words to comfort him. You make them compliment each other so well. Great chapter.

Thanks for the update brilliant writing as usual. King Clarkson was such an evil tyrant. Look forward to the next update.

love it

Please can you update can't wait for you to continue writing this storyline. With your excellent writing skills I know I am going to enjoy this story.

This was really good! Please continue it!?

Just brilliant. you are a excellent creative write. Thank you for the updated formating.

My apologies for the formatting error.

Please can you reformat and sort out chapter and update. Can't read your story. Looking forward to the reading the chapter. Thank you.

I cant read anything. But the story sounds interesting!