Reviews for DO NOT READ THIS STORY!
magic135 chapter 42 . 6/24
I wonder what mermaid movie misty was watching?
Joshua Miller chapter 1 . 5/10
Maybe you could add a new chapter that stars "Pikachu & Vaporeon's Vacation".
Josh Miller chapter 1 . 12/28/2019
You know, you can save it for me and then try to finish it in 2020.
Josh Miller chapter 67 . 12/28/2019
but I love the Pikachu and Vaporeon parts
catspats31 chapter 67 . 12/26/2019
While the writing quality of your story is good in terms of spelling and grammar in the chapters before this chapter, please note this part of the Content Guidelines:

"The chapter system is not to be used as placeholder for non-story content such as author notes. You can add short author notes to the beginning or at the end of stories but never as individual chapters."

You should put the preview in your profile or make a full story out of it. Don't disturb the story section with any chapter of a story that has nothing but non-story related material.
Josh Miller chapter 67 . 12/17/2019
I do not mind the swearing at all.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/12/2019
Really, make up your mind, will ya? If you don't want people to read this story, delete it and keep it that way. If you tell people NOT to read this story, they're more likely to do so. That's called reverse psychology.

Look, I know you don't like harsh criticism, but if you don't pay any mind to it, you're never gonna improve as a writer. You need to read more: it's easy to tell how well-read someone is by the way they write.
Josh Miller chapter 67 . 12/1/2019
Please don't delete this story, because I really love it so very much!
juaniu1994 chapter 7 . 11/30/2019
Why are you going to delate one of your best stories?
Josh Miller chapter 56 . 11/28/2019
I like the ending part, where Mew becomes Ash's new Pokemon
Josh Miller chapter 67 . 11/27/2019
I do, believe me I really do love it!
Josh Miller chapter 32 . 11/27/2019
I like the part, because Butterfree and Pink Butterfree wanted Pikachu and Vaporeon to kiss before new year
Josh Miller chapter 25 . 11/24/2019
I like the part when Alakazam is like a leader to the Pokemon
Josh Miller chapter 67 . 11/24/2019
I really do like the preview!
Josh Miller chapter 67 . 11/11/2019
I do, but I wish to see the final parts of The Longest Road
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