is the clan still alive? loving the story

Good history ;) ;)

Yeah. It’s a problem in the community. I was once able to enjoy fics like that (not that extreme of 7 years oldish doing the dirty deed) but I can’t just turn my brain off and enjoy fics like that anymore. Suspension of disbelief is too much.

My rewiev from chapter two still stands.

What you're ranting about is sadly a common ocurence, and it is also what I in the end fear in this story. Keep in mind that I always has that fear when ai find a decent or good story that I like so it is nothing personall.

Some of my favorite stories are "Better left unsaidSealed Kunai" and "Chasing Yesterday", have you read any of them? If not I deeply recommend them.

If you're concerned about the quality of your story I would advice that you wait to publish and reread your chapter a couple times, perhaps even the day after you wrote it so simply see if you're happy with it or find anything you would like to and.

Do you have any beta? If not I would love to, your story has caught my interest.

Have a good night.

While I do like the concept of your story the amount of strength you're giving Sasuke/Naruto troubles me. While it is your own story I myself disslike when a character becomes godlike or far too strong. I find that Sasuke currently are equal or slightly stronger then Itachi att 11 I hope you keep it att that level while he'll grow steadily. The reason I disslike theese things or the rinnegan is that I find that it destroyes the tension that might grow or might unbalance the story that suddenly everyone of the main characters are demigods. While this have not happend in your story I am simply using it as an example. Make Sasuke strong if that is your wish, but personally I would not like to see him too strong. And please no rinnegan, while the rinnegan att strong its abilities are too godlike for my taste, I prefer the more simple but strong bloodlines..
But in the end it is your story, not mine.

I'll look forward to see your progress, and remember that details gives us readers a deepht to your story but too rough much drown them.

Now for positive criticism.
I absolutly love the concept of Naruto reborn in Sasuke lovely, a merging of Narutos personality with Sasukes experience is interesting. The depression a individuall would feel after a massacre combined with a strong will? Astounishing.
Your writing style is easy to read for the most part, I would however recommend that you put the author notes in the end instead of in the middle of part.
While I find that it lacks the deeper details the amount you currently have makes it an easy read but prevents me from diving deep in it or completly understand your characters, ofcourse this likely differs from person to person.
That you make Sasuke acept the thoughts of Naruko harboring a crush is lovely, expecialy that he also decides to wait to pursue anything. This shows that he reacts naturally to an eventuall object of attraction and hormones while also keeping a mature head about it. I simply hope that you will not rush it or make it seem forced. Personally when I make stories I think how this would go in our world betwen peoples instead of fictional while taking in mind the physological effect of the shinobi world.

Overall your story holds much promise and I find myself looking forward to read more! I would however love more details.

Regards, Sascha.

Interesting story continue soon and give Naruto (Sasuke) rinne-sharingan

Not bad,i'm very curious about next events. Oh,Oum,thath thing is even more stupid than the shitty excuse for Percy to be betrayed(hell,i can understand Harry or even Usagi,but Percy?),tough in a story of Soul Eater in the Italian fandom i've even found a girl who see his partner get killer by another student of the Dmwa,who then take her to Death City,but she doesn't denunce him,he even become her new partner!Can you give me the title of thath crap,so i can badmouth a little the author?

Nice chapter/update

Aww! Naruko is SO adorable! Sasuke/Naruto stop making her blush! You need to take responsibility for doing that! I cannot wait to see how the test goes. Sasuke/Naruto will do as he usually does and turn everything on it's head to what everyone else thinks is going to happen.

Although I am interested in the benefits they get for being the reincarnations of Ashura and Indra. I do not recall any specific benefits other then getting Naruto's Six Path Sage Mode and Sasuke right EMS becoming a Rinnegan with six tomoe when The Sage gave each of them half of his chakra. If they get other benefits I am not aware.

Good work,i hope you had a nice Easter

Awesome

Will he be a reincarnation of indra aswell? The rasengan is going to be difficult to explain but... he could say it was an experiment in chakra control... just some ideas. Good story so far.

Still doing great! Excited for the next chapter already!

I can not wait to see people's reaction when they start going out with each other. Sakura and Ino might just have heart attacks along with the rest of the fan girls. I kind of want Naurot/Sasuke to ask Naruko out in front of the while class just to see the chaos it would cause.

Anyway... keep going this going. I can not wait to see how it starts diverging from Cannon.

gotta say i absolutely love this story and i can't wait for more chapters to be released keep up the wonderful work