Reviews for The Sun Shines Upon a Darkened World |
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bayramlit7 chapter 1 . 7/26 Dude , i saw The Caped Baldy of Nasuverse from other comments and read it. It was totally masterpiece. Please write rest of story. |
tural chapter 1 . 7/4 please update The caped baldu of naruverse |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/3 Pleaae update the caped baldy of naruverse |
NyxSky chapter 1 . 7/4 this is awesome |
Arcanetion chapter 1 . 7/27/2019 Broooo, you really should continue Caped Baldy of the Nasuverse. That fanfiction was one of the best I ever read! |
xbox432 chapter 1 . 4/4/2019 You did a great job of capturing the sadness of the moment in regards to Dinah. I'll be curious to see just how things pan out now that she's got a protector... and exactly how the protectorate are going to handle things. Let's hope they don't do a stupid. |
apostlelord chapter 1 . 2/3/2019 update please |
Wanderstar chapter 1 . 1/21/2019 I cant wait for more updates. I noticed some mistakes, like POV. Not much though. I'm excited though to see how much more this story has changed from it's previous version |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/18/2019 Good start so far. By the way when is the next chapter for ‘Sharingan of the Crimson Princess’ going to be uploaded? |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/13/2019 It's refreshing to see a fic where dinah is a main character, but hopefully this chapter is enough for you to get the "outside character falls in new world and saves character, but is misunderstood for a villain" trope out of your system... though Dinah here seems to have a younger/innocent mentality than most other representations of her in fics that I have read (before she saw the bodies, anyways) |
Lazymanjones96 chapter 1 . 1/14/2019 Interesting stuff looking forward to more |
A Rarer Fondness chapter 1 . 1/13/2019 When you want to be an Archer but become Grand Lancer (somehow). |
alexc123 chapter 1 . 1/13/2019 I'm so happy to see this back. I dont think there are any fics focusing on Karna. |
superpierce chapter 1 . 1/13/2019 um why isn't their a second chapter. |