Reviews for the moment between breath
The Half-Blood Divergent chapter 3 . 7/21
one of the best stories I've ever read
canadianclaire chapter 1 . 3/6
I just discovered Lucifer on Netflix and headed over to find fanfiction to keep me going until Season5! Your story is definitely one of the best I've read - actually so much more fulfilling that Season 4! Please consider writing more Deckstar - pretty please :)
Natters chapter 3 . 1/30
Great fic. Loved it
Guest chapter 3 . 1/29
This story is just WOW! that last chapter was sinfully delicious ! Haha. Thank you for your writing skills !
Guest chapter 3 . 9/22/2019
I love your story! So well written! You are an amazing author. I couldn't put it down. I can't praise you more for this story. Keep up the incredible work and I look forward to reading more from you. Thank you for all your hard work and creativity.
Guest chapter 3 . 6/1/2019
Cool
AndYouLetHerGo chapter 3 . 5/6/2019
Wow...
AndYouLetHerGo chapter 2 . 5/6/2019
So I gotta ask. Are you a writer on the show? Because the way you capture Lucifer and Chloe... I have to remind myself that I am not actually watching an episode but rather reading a fic. What you have done is amazing. And I cannot wait to read the conclusion to this. Oh and "Darling, the Old Man's left me on read practically since the dawn of time," had me belching out a laugh that terrorized the people around me!
ladyTpower chapter 3 . 5/4/2019
amazing story
hummergirlnv chapter 3 . 5/1/2019
Love this story, and the final love scene was awesome.
Sey77 chapter 3 . 2/13/2019
Oh my Dad... this story has been amazing. I love it...
NewLight 30 chapter 3 . 2/11/2019
Oh my god...enjoyed every minute reading this
NewLight 30 chapter 2 . 2/10/2019
Loving it more and more
NewLight 30 chapter 1 . 2/10/2019
Loved this chapter, I know it’s just the first but it’s very captivating
Agusai chapter 3 . 1/30/2019
What as amazing story! I loved first two chapters and honestly I could see much more potential out of Raziel. She fit so perfectly in the story!
When I was reading chapter 1 my mind was constantly on "please let it be lovers card".
And chapter 3... oh my... yaaaas Hot, steamy and perfect for the Devil himself. Maybe there was to many ILUs for my taste but it still fit in the story perfectly.

I really wish for more Lucifer fanfics written by you!
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