Hello! Great work so far. I just wanted to point out some confusing parts of this chapter. The scene when Harry wakes up is odd with the way they are reacting to each other and how Harry remembers that the ink is poisonous but decides to just wipe himself off. Then later, there’s that they are in 5th year but are 17 years old. In Transfigurations class Draco asks about the ink stains and Harry gives the nonanswer of Alex and then at the beginning of the next scene basically the same conversation occurs. And finally in the flying class scene he has a show down with a first year Goyle. That’s odd for one because earlier you had mentioned Draco sitting next to two guys that are thought to be Crabb and Goyle.

disapointing to get the same chapter. But all good.

Thank you for the update

You posted the same chapter twice. Just letting ya know.

Actually, it appears that the first TEN chapters are from coveted-one and you have not added ANY original material. Any plans to do that?

Your fascination with Draco Malfoy, the ferret Death Eater is extremely mind-boggling.

This story is brilliant. Thank you for the update

Any chance you could fix this page? it's all filed with codes...

Another good wbwl fanfiction that is underrated. Unless you haven't updated this for a while, otherwise i would have known this fic.

anyway, definitely one of my fav chapters yet. if not, the best. please don't give up on this!

you should fix the format of chapter two. it's broken.

Harry should flat out REFUSE to be called Harry POTTER while at Hogwarts. POTTER hasn't been his name since the day they tossed him aside as a baby, and he should DEMAND that they address him by his NEW and LEGAL name of Keller instead. Or do they all think hes going to leave his adopted family whos been the ONLY family hes ever know and 'come back' and be a Potter again just because THEY want him to and forget the life and family hes had for the last 7 years?