please continued

power levels.. considering that this is GT power levels are far too low

Keep in mind in the Dragon Ball manga Future Android 17 at less them 50% was overpowering Future SS1 Gohan..

There for Android 18 and Android 17 would at least have a power level over 300 million.

I'm sorry but this story is bad Goku is a married man and Should paired with any other woman.. how would any self-respecting fan take the story seriously if you do not respect such things.

However if you created Au story from the ground up then okay.. But that takes Build up. For you to make radical changes you would have to start from Ground Zero.. Aka Dragon Ball..

Da fuck is wrong with chapter 2 my guy this is a terrible chapter

Great

Well, I suppose I understand why the title is Dragon Ball Super Evolution.

You just ruin Saiyans for everyone... Happy?

Nope.

These power levels are beyond inaccurate and how is this universe 6? I see nothing but OC characters everywhere.

P.S. Don't tell me you seriously think Super Saiyan 4 is on par with Super Saiyan God or even Super Saiyan Blue? If so, you are smoking some good stuff m8.

chapter

Good

I got only a few paragraphs in, and I'm disgusted. You're a sick man. Post this nasty shit on AO3, they're into that kind of stuff.

Videl and Pan's power levels are wack, and why would you put that incest scene between a PRE-TEEN and her GRANDFATHER in when he's never even going to see her again?

Super Goku fought cumber was a good spar and like to see goku have Caulifla and kale and rutaba and Vados in goku harem too.

Its good and but like to see goku get a harem.

Good one and hope goku has busty harem as well.