Reviews for The Girl of Steel and the Silver Speedster
Seraphy64 chapter 5 . 7/18
I know super speed is cool and all but... Teleportation has it beat. Why doesn't he apparate?
NobodyOwens5 chapter 9 . 7/16
nice, that last bit was actually kind of nice.

I have to admit I'm not usually a fan of Supergirl, but you've done a good job giving her character that makes her interesting to me. I look forward to future updates.
Guest chapter 9 . 7/13
Great to see updates to this story!
Scandalf chapter 5 . 7/2
Wow, Harry sure lost his cool quickly there. For no reason too...
Also, she managed to figure out what signs he gives off when he's lying without even actually knowing if he's lying or not in the first place? And she figured him all out after ONE question?! You clearly watch too many crime tv-series...
I've continued reading to see if it gets better or not but it's just getting worse and worse every chapter.
WilliamJago chapter 9 . 6/19
Brilliant. I found this story about a week ago and I've been enjoying it ever since. I really like the character interactions - especially Harry and Kara constantly butting heads over their different methods, as well as Winn geeking out over everything (pretty sure I would have in his place). Personally I think you've nailed the characters personalities brilliantly and it's really been fun to read their interactions.

I also like this new take on Harry, essentially combining magic with the power of a speedster. It's going to be fun finding out what powers and spells he does possess (this essentially being an alternate version, I am looking forward to seeing what the Rowling of this Universe got right and what she got wrong - that was a good idea by the way, it keeps even the hardcore Potter fans guessing).

Please don't let negative reviews put you off. Personally I like what you are doing with his story and am really looking forward to seeing where it goes. Please update soon :)

With regard to some of the criticisms I'm seeing here:

1) This is an alternate version of Harry Potter (he has said more than once that the Rowling of Supergirl's universe did not write a precise version of his life) The differences between him and Rowling's character make this story more interesting as it keeps us guessing what he can and cannot do. I am sure we will see him use more magic in the future and find out why he does not use it all the time - just be patient.

2) If you don't like this story or the ideas behind it then do not read it. Constructive criticism is good but please do not try to put the author off writing and ruin it for those of us who do enjoy the story.

3) Helen Keller, if you don't know who she is then check the internet, it is so easy! I was taught about her whilst studying Religious Education in school. She went deaf and blind whilst still a baby. As a young girl she was taught sign language by a woman named Annie Sullivan. As she could not see, she had to hold Annie's hand whilst Annie used sign language - to feel the shapes Annie's hand made whilst signing each word. It was difficult, but eventually she managed to make the connection and realise what this meant. The breakthrough was when Annie poured water over her hands and signed 'water'. Helen suddenly realised that 'water' was the name of what was running over her hands. I can't imagine the challenges she must faced in society.

William Jago.
Ykomat chapter 7 . 6/16
I wonder what form the speed force takes for Harry is it Dumbledore or Lily or someone else
SkyWorthy chapter 9 . 5/24
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Raccoon Tgr chapter 9 . 5/21
I really like this story and I hope you update it soon
T51b Moridin chapter 5 . 5/20
...Wow, he gave so much away so fast. What a scrub.
T51b Moridin chapter 4 . 5/20
I always notice folks never really explore the fact that there is literally no way for anyone to be faster than the speed force. And yet somehow people always give arbitrary limitations to those who have it. There is literally no method to stop him. He is literally the concept of speed incarnate, and all that it entails. I have no idea how he would be caught considering its a mystical Universe force and not simply a simple mutant power or something.
T51b Moridin chapter 2 . 5/20
I am completely unfamiliar with this continuity. I guess this is the television show of Supergirl rather than following any of the canonical comic timelines which generally have Kara as raised by Kal's parents in Kansas before she later moves to the city when she is older. Odd to see her working with Cat Grant as well.
T51b Moridin chapter 1 . 5/20
Huh. What an interesting and odd interpretation of Harry Potter. I liked the claws.
mintushar844 chapter 9 . 5/19
Harry potter knows when villiams go to terrible lengths and he can put them down to death bed if it goes over the roof. Kara Danvers doesn't know the dangers around the world she has a tunnel vision and goddy to shoes to kill a unreedemable. " I want to see when paladin kills lex Luthor and his mother.
Guest chapter 9 . 5/16
Interesting plot so far!

Are they finally on good terms?
Chaos chapter 9 . 5/16
Quick question, if Hellen Keller was blind, how did she communicate in sign language, which as far as I know, requires people to be able to see the signs?
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