Great is still soon is very good excellent

hell yes im loving the first 2 chapters there are not enough captain marvel/naruto fanfics out there please tell me your going to continue this

very interesting

Well crap-baskets this isn't gonna be good anyways keep up the great work!

Nice
I will say however that you were missing done words
Like when someone was talking the name of the person Who was talking wasn't there so you might want to go and fix that

I like the idea behind the story but the grammar was bad that it took me out of the story at times
Check your grammar and you'll be great

Great start! Looking forward to reading the suspense and how Carol will react to Naruto. Will she be a duche like Superman in young justice? Or just takes it slow like wolverine finding out about x23? Cheers!

this is good I can't wait to read more of it

Great opening chapter, I really enjoyed the idea of the original so seeing you come back to it is a treat. Only criticism is that you need to either re-read your chapters before posting or get a beta as there was a few mistakes mixed in but nothing too damaging. Keep it up and hope to see the next chapter soon.

i get afraid when i read the first chapter of a good fic , because it take too long to update to the next plz update .