Really fun idea, the ending is a bit eh I agree, but it's a fun story overall so i'll give it to ya :)

This was a really weird concept done super well! I genuinely adored it and I give you so many props for the creativity

The 4th wall breaking ending slapped me in the face and called me a fool

I don't mind the sex. If anything, I welcome it.

It's honestly impressive how you can make an interesting story out of the premise Casper The Horny Ghost

You could have had Orochimaru "take her place" lol.

And so, Orochimaru made Death his wife. (Shapeshifter, yo)

Idea: Naruto goes to sound accidentally and pisses off everyone except the four and Orichumaru doesn't kill him no matter how much he wants to because of the fox

Well that happened

Also the previous two reviews were just suggestions because of your ending comment and were also not fleshed out so dont get irritated by my presumptions. Love ya

Tayuya is still alive after the fight with rookie nine and is rescued by Kabuto.

During an experiment being done on her, Orochimaru used Minato's kunai to disect her. Onw day he discovered the seal fro the kunai had vanished and formed a part of Tayuyas curse seal.

During the training trip Jiraiya shoes Naruto the seals of the Hiraishin whiskt saying its impossible to crack but Naruto keeps insisting so Jiraiya shows him. Naruto manages to actuvate it but finds that he can only teleport to Tayuya. She tries to kill him. He tries to hse friendship. She refuses. So he starts pestering her and she continuously tries to kill him. Cue Tsundere relationship where Tayuya tries to kill Naruto but attacks anyone else that tries to. Also make Tayuyas seal form 3 or something and make it like super saiyan because an OP Saiyan Tsundere Tayuya sounds great.

(Bonus points if at some point he teleports to her and Sasuke is there and he says to Naruto he refuses to return and that he'll kill Naruto and Naruto just repli3s that he shouldn't overthink or get his panties in a bunch because he's there for Tayuya)

Extra bonus points if there's an epilogue with Tayuya sucessfully killing Naruto in their old age and then she uses Edo Tensei to bring him back because shes lissed he died

Tayuya is crazyish empress/princess (think Azula's level of authority but more) and Naruto has been prophesised to defeat her father so she stages a coup and imprisons her own father, then uses that fact to get Naruto as a servant or something and uses him but then develops and unhealthy fixation on him in an aggressive possessive way but also wanting him to have free choice. - potential Narutox Tayuya idea

I am looking for that new idea to

So I was looking at your stories and I noticed you tend to do the same pairings over and over. So my recommendation is do something different go with a complete different pairing, even a gender bender. I haven't seen fem shino, fem Lee, fem kankuro, fem iruka, so instead of drying out your inspiration by righting another Naruto and Tayuya try something else,but that's just my opinion

ehh the chapters not a total flop it ends in a weird kind of random way that fits the story as for a new Tayuya idea...shit there aren't a lot that aren't taken how about making her Naruto's sister in an A.U that could be kinky?

Can't wait