| Reviews for A One in a Million |
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   Master of Mankind chapter 6 . 8/31 Next chapter? |
| Infinity Deku chapter 1 . 6/24 I'm seriously hoping Jaune brutalizes one of them with his Semblance, just without crippling or killing them. |
| krgreen101 chapter 1 . 6/14 what is this 'tic' thing? like is it a. his body twich? |
| K chapter 6 . 10/24/2019 Please update soon. |
| scottusa1 chapter 6 . 9/19/2019 Great chapter. Keep it up. Laters. |
| Josh Spicer chapter 6 . 9/10/2019 Has Jaune been given a reason NOT to be a "cuntwaffle"? He's been discriminated against and treated horribly all his life by women who don't give a damn about him but how useful he is. Is he harsh? Yes, but a few good apples in a bunch who clearly view him as lesser (like the faunus in the show, THAT low) won't change his opinion overnight. He should still worrry about his team first, then his wonen issues later. Focus on Weiss right now than worry about trying to be seen as equal. Him beating Cardin63 is a good start to both, though I fear it's gonna take a "Black Down by the Docks" level event to do it, and that's already an inevitability. |
| X3runner chapter 6 . 9/9/2019 Neat you have a little side redemption arc ... rimshot... I mean I could see jaune developing a soft spot for the other second class group more out of a shared need to rail against the system. |
| thomas the tank engine chapter 6 . 9/6/2019 Nice can't wait to see more |
| Rakkis3059 chapter 3 . 9/5/2019 Rereading this since you updated this recently for us. Thanks for that. I really love this story. Your portrayal of a matriarcal society here is great. One thing that I feel will really help with this setting is to pay very careful attention to your use of pronouns. The biggest example I can think of here is to use "girls" instead of "guys". If you really consider it there is no way a group of ladies would refer to themselves in a masculine fashion. Even subconsciously they would look down upon all men and many of the neutral maculine pronouns we use without thinking in the engliah language would not be used as prevalently in the AU you have given us herw. |
| Kalbario chapter 6 . 9/3/2019 I don't know what everyone's whining about. In my own opinion, there isn't enough hostility being displayed. Maybe I just want Jaune to fry a couple of people or to actually display this gynophobia he is supposed to have cuz I don't see it. PS. Regarding his electrokenisis, is it on the level of Narbel Gamma's of Overlord or Ginji of get backers? |
| The Shadow Monarch chapter 6 . 8/31/2019 More violence. I DON'T CARE. I THRIVE OFF IT. Seriously, I do. Keep Jaune negative and keep him the antagonist because posivitiy is sickening |
| the-lost-memories6 chapter 6 . 8/31/2019 Is there gonna be pairings in the future |
| Caboose.RvB343 chapter 6 . 8/30/2019 Noooooooo the chapter can’t end there |
| Guest chapter 6 . 8/30/2019 Glad this is back will you show why Jaune has so many issues with his sisters soon and will you show the abuse I feel like that will let us understand him better |
| PF115 chapter 6 . 8/29/2019 *Reads last line "Uh, phrasing?" |
