Brilliant and very sweet. Thank you for writing and posting!

Oh, this is such a cool story! It's so sweet! I love the idea of Law being a time traveler and being able to save Corazon. The end was so sweet too.

Nice

This is utterly fantastic, and hilarious. The fact that Law is seemingly letting himself, for the first time in a long time, relax and start to plan to change things for the future (with even more chaos in mind). That sound like the influence of Luffy, and the more pragmatic side that clash against each other.

This might just be me, but as time goes on I'm sort of starting to get desensitized to tragic flashback deaths in One Piece. All right, maybe not completely, but definitely to a certain extent. Like, if you take personalities of tragic death characters, Bell-mere, Saul and Corazon just to name a few, those are basically very similar characters. So while I love Nami, Robin and Law, a lot, I don't necessarily care about before mentioned trio as stand-alone characters as much as I could or should. They are awesome and their deaths are tragic, but beyond that stories about them don't really have as much of an impact on me as the ones centered around Luffy, for example, do.

Knowing that, I went into this story expecting to get semi-invested, read it, leave a review and move on to the next one. Whichever one that ends up being.
However, I'm sitting here and wondering what happens next. How does this affect the story. Would Doflamingo go after the two? Where does Law's character go now that Cora-san is still alive and with him? Again, none of the reactions are because of Cora surviving, but more because of what happens next.
So instead of feeling satisfied I just finished a good one-shot I feel satisfaction, but also curiosity.

That's a good thing, I guess. Even though the story won't continue and that might actually be for the best. Some questions are, after all, best left unanswered.

As for the chapter itself Law fairly quickly turned into a badass cute kid there and I found it to be very adorable. Corazon was just the way I remembered him, which is to be expected, since Law was the only one that knows the future, or at least up until the point he changed it.
So, yeah, good job.

Omgomgomgomg i can just imagine the look Akainu basfard wlould have shishishishi

hey! this is great! are you planning on continuing it? plkease do, even if it's not a fully fleshed story a one-shot of Law's future in this AU is enough! or him saving Ace? please? anyway even if you don't do it (but I would love if you did) this one-shot was great!

This was so self indulgent, I loved it! I never realized how much I needed a fluffy piece where Corazon actually lives and Law isn't ooc. I wouldn't mind seeing more of this. Thanks for the story!

It's sad that this is just a one shot... This really good... I could imagine the chaos.. Hehe..

cool

That’s a great fanfiction! I like it!

AAAaaaAaAAA I love your works so much I'm cryingggg

This was adorable and well written. I would love to see more from this verse. Law reclaiming his sword, his crew, his ship, etcetera. Marineford sounds fantastic too. Luffy would love him forever for that. Thanks for sharing.

My heart!

good for u Law! sniff