Reviews for A Hero with a Demon within
Guest chapter 15 . 7/6/2019
Sequel?
Ryu Otsutsuki chapter 12 . 6/7/2019
Un oh someone is going to get it and get it good lol
Ryu Otsutsuki chapter 11 . 6/7/2019
I can't get enough of this story bro it's so freaking awesome
Ryu Otsutsuki chapter 10 . 6/7/2019
Oh boy things are going to get hot
Ryu Otsutsuki chapter 9 . 6/7/2019
Oh my this is getting so much better and better I'm so loving this story
Ryu Otsutsuki chapter 8 . 6/7/2019
Wow i didn't see that one coming I'm shocked I tell you shocked
Ryu Otsutsuki chapter 7 . 6/7/2019
Beautiful absolutely beautiful brother I love it this had almost made me turn flew up in the sky
Ryu Otsutsuki chapter 6 . 6/7/2019
Wow that's rare and amazing John and Carrie are falling in love with each other without even knowing it
Ryu Otsutsuki chapter 5 . 6/7/2019
Nice this shows a lot of excitement and promise I'm loving it bro keep it up
Ryu Otsutsuki chapter 4 . 6/7/2019
Nice bro this is freaking awesome I love how John knock the living daylights out of that jackass Billy man I hate goblins likes him
DanDrake chapter 15 . 5/29/2019
Great story 10/10
Ultimatrix bearer chapter 15 . 1/25/2019
Round of applause!
Ultimatrix bearer chapter 11 . 1/25/2019
Tony clearly payed attention to tropes school.

THERE IS NO KILL LIKE OVERKILL!
Nighthawk6595 chapter 15 . 12/5/2018
That was an incredible story. I actually cried during the romantic buildup between John and Carrie. We have a troubled hero with an alien symbiote bound to him arriving in a small town, meeting a beautiful girl who is seen as an outcast, with telekinesis.

This is an alternate take on the events of the 2013 Carrie film integrated with an Avengers-verse with Anti-Venom as the hero.

This shows a troubled hero running from his past, trying to live a new life. He meets Carrie White and is sickened by way she was tormented throughout her life. It shows John's struggle in trying to find out about her - even going to Tony Stark, who he despised for failing to save his sister. Then came the parts where John protected Carrie from her bullies, from the wannabe thugs and her own mother, it shows that he cares for her and is willing to do whatever it takes to make her happy. When Sue Snell and Tommy Ross joined in to make amends, Carrie gave them a second chance. After being helped out by Stark and witnessing the telekinetic give her biggest tormentor a second chance, he gave Stark a second chance as well and forgave him for his failure.

He received a premonition of the Black Prom and figured that the Ultras would push Carrie over the edge. He kept an eye on their movements, thanks to Stark. Because of this, he knew exactly what they were up to and with the help of the Lethal Protectors, prevented the Black Prom.

I love the buildup and how the disaster in the movie was stopped before it could happen and Carrie White found love. It's a happy ending, don't you think?

Anyway, Great Story!
The IDEALLER 1995 chapter 15 . 10/15/2018
Thanks for the call out again lol :)
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