Reviews for As We Chase the Sun |
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![]() ![]() ![]() this is amazing. I love the focus on the Black family and how you perfectly showed Bellatrix’s slow recovery. It’s the perfect pace. I hope you update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hope things work out and lucius draco and definitely Harry Hermione Sirius Narcissa Bellatrix Andromeda Nymphadora Ted etc can all be family/pack. Great story so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update asap! |
![]() ![]() ![]() No Bella don’t join the dark side. |
![]() ![]() I love this story! Great job with the characters and plot! Please update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm really enjoying the constant conflict within Bella, it's very interesting and I cannot wait to see what happens next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I couldn't stop laughing in this chapter! The whole incident with the wall and the painting had me crying with laughter and then the bath too! Too funny! Really loving this story... Better continue reading :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story, the way of you built the characters and mix the duality of the feelings. I can't wait to see how it progresses! Thank you |
![]() ![]() I’m so glad you updated. I love this story and the way you have portrayed the complexity of the different relationships in this story is really good. Can’t wait to find out what happens next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This sea to be turning sideways. |
![]() ![]() ![]() yesss I was wondering what was going to happen. No way Bella would bend to Dumbledore and be stuck at grimmauld for so long! can't wait for the next update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ya se está liando! Bellatrix y Hermione tienen que hablar! Es una guerra fria, no pueden seguir así. Como siempre me encanta y espero con impaciencia el próximo capítulo |
![]() ![]() I love the transitions between the thoughts of the sisters. Going from Bellatrix in the yard to Andromeda with the aurors was so smooth. And I love what you do with Narcissa’s grief coupled with her desire for Bellatrix to still be alive. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Does this mean that Bella’s a Sociopath? The way she seems to have problems having remorse and seems to have had this problem prior to becoming a wolf, it sounds like that’s what you are alluding too. Anyway, interesting chapter not sure how things are going to progress to any kind of relationship for Bella and Hermione at this point so it will be an interesting read to see how that comes about. Until then, thanks for sharing! |
![]() ![]() Convoluted, but necessarily so. |