Quite nice chapter, you seem to having improved a little

Thanks for the great chapter I hope you try update faster until the tournament to save Pyrrha add her and Glynda to the harem, then you can you follow your own plot since multiple events happened before RWBY got United.

It would seem that Jotaro is gaining more fans amongst Remnant's female population.

Remember about my question regarding the Samurai Girls anime? Think you can make a fic with its elements?

Great story, needs more chapters.

i would think a bad girl like emerald would get turn on by jotaro.

and comparing to other fanfic story, where the love for the mint chocolate girl?

Thanks for the chapter, do you take requests for harem or did you already made your choice if not then I request Ruby, Pyrrha and Yang, keep up the great work.

Lol took her money too

Great chapter I suppose kimi outfit is similar to her uniform upgrade in canon, I didn’t understand the point of giving Nora and Pyrrha bigger busts unless it’s joke for kimi world, you could rename the team Jack/Jake as in “Jake of all trades”.

i think it works for the time being being a two person team, that a "joke" on its own when its suppose to be 4, but then again i doubt it would need two more teammates anyways, unless you would include other characters from their world with them.

is this a joke to you?

Update please

i wonder who will the other 2 be if there will be but if just them 2, then i'd hazardly guess JoKi or KiJo, seems a bit expected, lets try something else...JiKo, KoJi, doesn't sound right...hmmmm

Yo! Thanks for inviting me to look at your story! Here are my thoughts:

The points below are my writing style suggestions. Don't worry about following them if you already like what you got. Much of these are also things I'm trying to work on myself, and what I want to improve on in my own works.:

1. You put too much clothing description into a single paragraph. It could use some spreading out a little. The way I do it in my stories is I try my best to tie the description to an action. Or try to keep it as simple as possible and not worry too much about the accessories.

For example if I were to describe Ruby, I'd say something like "She darted toward them so fast that she became a blur, identifiable only by the red of her cloak." Or "Ruby strolled with a giant red scythe in her hand, her movements casual and carefree as though her weapon weighed less than air."

2. Too many detailed clothing descriptions in a very short amount of time. Keep in mind that everytime you make a description, time stops for the reader unless you tie it to an action the character is doing. Be mindful if you want the reader to keep moving forward to the next plot point, or if you want them to just stick around and appreciate the moment.

3. You could use more sensory detail. When Jotaro and Kimi wake up in Remnant, what's the temperature like? Hot or cold? Is it windy? What does it smell like? When Jotaro is lying on top of Kimi, how heavy is he? How hard is his body and how soft is her's? You have a description of her breasts, but not of her body. What do either of them smell? What are the ambient sounds they hear in the area? Or is it just silence?

4. Descriptions of their surroundings can be added. You can describe how the castle looks, the color of the room, whether or not it has air conditioning, etc. Obviously this can be very difficult when trying to balance both environment descriptions and character descriptions. It's your discretion on which is more important for the moment.

5. Be careful about randomly jumping into different character's heads. Blake's line "Is he for real?" Is unnecessary because we're not supposed to know what she's thinking. Choose your characters for your POV, and stick to them.

Personally, I believe that different people notice different things. If you're writing a description from Jotaro's point of view, he'll probably focus his eyes more on a person's clothes and weapons than their bodies. And it will probably different from Kimi's POV as well.

The premise is interesting. I wonder how you'll go about moving the plot forward.

Subjective Opinions. These you can ignore if you want to:
1. In the English dub for Stardust Crusaders, They say that their ghost warrior spirits are called "Stands" is because its an expression of your soul, something that "Stands Tall", "Stands Proud", and Stands with you at all times. It's a poetic thing, where if you don't have the will to "Take a Stand" for what you believe in, then you don't have a very strong soul. I'm surprised you didn't have Jotaro say something like that. It would have made Jotoro seem even cooler and smarter than he looks, and I think would have endeared him more to someone like Kimi, who appreciates different forms of beauty.

2. English dub replaces Jotaro's "Yare Yare Daze" with "Good Grief" like he's Charlie Brown or something. Consider changing it? Doesn't make too much of a difference so its totally cool if you don't.
That being said. Careful about having him say the catchphrase TOO much. I'm not saying it's used too much here. That's for you to decide. But just be careful about it getting too old. Lol there's a reason why people make fun of Naruto's english dub, because him saying "Believe it" so much ended up being really annoying.

PFFFFT! YE KIMI! Cardin ain't gettin no booty!
Also! Thanks for the reminder bud! I almost forgot...thanks to damn school works...grrr...and HAPPY THANKSGIVING! See ya in the next chapter!

Yello! I found a treasure indeed! Tell ye what, since you gave us readers a new story and one that I will (whole heartedly) enjoy, I'll tell some readers to see this and some of your stories...basically I'm bribing you for more chapters...not a bad deal though right? Especially since Horizon in the Middle of Nowhere deserves more love. But its your choice. See ya!