For a moment, I thought that the Maria in this chapter would be Maria Santiago (Bobby & Ronnie Anne's mom) but then I saw this Maria has a different last name.

I wonder if the Night Prowler is a character from the actual show or an OC. I didn't expect Agnes Johnson to make a cameo.

Wow this is a great story! Hope you update it soon.

This stuff is great! You have to work on this one next, if you have any time of course. Great idea for a story.

God I fucking love this story. Please continue it.

I must admit, I didn't expect Lincoln's kids in this fic to be "sin children". We got to see Lemy's thought on his dad but I wonder what Lyra's thoughts on her dad are and I also wonder who the first woman Lincoln loved is...

Interesting premise, and the killer seems to be very interesting. Lincoln seems to be a good detective, and the fact that he does not spend much time with the son is slightly understandable, though sad.
I liked how you used Lemy and Lyra, but that gave me a question: in this AU, was Lemy born out of a normal relationship with a non-sister Luna or through incest?