I wished this story was longer and the cullens came back as she was turned

Thanks for sharing.

I enjoyed this but my only real issue is Alice would've seen nearly all of this, at least at the start before Jacob came in. I feel like, if she thought Bella was in danger at least Alice would come back. I mean it could be argued that Alice would also see the end result and decide against it. Just feels weird that nothing at all happened with the Cullens. Now I kind of want to do this ship.

I won't hide it, it was frustrating as hell, and sometimes i thought there was drama just for the sake of it (like you added too much drama for nothing). But i still love this story and love how the relationship between Bella and Victoria evolved. Thanks for all the chapters!

Well done...

honestly crossovers not my thing. you seem to have a solid base and its very descriptive. You paint the screen well I see the scene vividly in my head. THANKS for WRITING

This was a really good story and it has a good ending, but... I'm a very spoiled reader and cannot help hoping you'll one day come back and add more, at least an epilogue where they meet the Cullens again (kinda inevitable when they have forever) if not a sequel where Bella's weird pre-change abilities has some relevance on her future gift . As I said I'm spoiled and always want more, even if the story is done and ended well, both as plot and from a technical point of view.
Thanks for writing, hope to see more from you, even new stories if my wish for this won't be fulfilled.

Great story.

OoOOoo! YES SUPERNATURAL SHIT IS HAPPENING!

This was a fantastic read well done

ooh that was an exciting ending those two are such drama queens XD I'm happy they end up together I love this pairing is so weird but fitting. thanks for the fic was really entertaining.

loved the whole thing *chef's kiss*

Great story your characters have an amazing depth to them that is hard to find in some other fics. I truly enjoyed your Victoria and her struggle in-between her humanity and vampiric nature. Your Bella while definitely your own has a strong cannon aspect to her so she's slightly cookie cutter but with a certain uniqueness all her own. In terms of cannon I'm not a fan of the pack so having it blatantly easy to hate the pack it felt good not having to feel sorry for any of them. Thank you for sharing ️. You are extremely talented.

oh my freaking goddes this shit just got on fire XD I love it damn you a your cliffhangers.
Pd. thank you for coming back love you and your fic.

Please update