Wow, I have absolutely no recollection of reading this epilogue before, which is very weird because I’m sure I must have! Anyway, it was super lovely.

Thank you for one of the best of the best that I have read on this site! You're a wonderful story teller. Cannot wait to read what else you've written. If you're seeing this in April of 2020, as I am writing it now, I hope that you and your family are well and safe.

Just getting rid of Victoria; but I imagine that's coming up?

What a relief! Thank you ... I appreciate how you wrote Bella's insistence on being treated respectfully; but the tension was difficult!

Just got it. I must have missed a bunch of hints, huh?

No questions, only hope that this won't make it worse between them. I can imagine that it might.

I've noticed that the talented writers on this site are quite good at fleshing out the story's characters who aren't Bella and Edward, including you. The original books provided a great baseline for them all, obviously, and I really enjoy what can only be described as "getting to know them better" when another author nails their characters. Thank you!

Great insight by Bella about her relationship with Alice without Edward's constant presence.

Good for Bella. The more I have read and processed the original Twilight, the more I realize that she subordinated a lot of herself to Edward and Alice while she was still human. This feels right.

I really like your "disclaimer" at the beginning; one of the things I enjoy about reading longer works here is that some authors become better, more confident writers just from the start to finish of a story. I am already enjoying this one; it goes along smoothly and you've also asked the reader to use their own intuition. It isn't a lazy read, which I very much appreciate. When I'm done, I will definitely check out your more recent story!

Very good story! Loved it too!

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