You're varying from 2nd to 3rd person. It's confusing

I edited chapter 1&2 so (y/n) should be replaced with Milli

Good story so far but what’s with the (y/n) thing are you doing that or is her name milli

So far I like it. The only criticism I have is that you have (y/n) and Millie throughout the first to chapters and possibly more. I hope you go back and change that.

Love this work awesome details as well

angelofthelord00: not at this moment... but maybe later.. glad you liked it though 3

sigh.. A really awesome final chapter.. sad though you ended this story.. can we expect a sequel?

poor loki, getting teased like that... soo hulk is back on earth. Do you think the dude played by jeff goldblum or valkyrie will come looking for him? since He has some tracer or shocker?

milli is just too nice... and protective loki is just precious!

awww i think i love sefa... So cute... wow, and milli is totally a badass princess now, claiming her title. and ross is such an ass.. I really wonder why anybody would have thought it a good idea for him to watch the avengers after hulk..

yey can't wait what she'll Do with the two knuckleheads... I really don't like my heroes fighting each other...

Oh my god. I was gonna cry. But honestly I’m so happy that that wasn’t the end of Millis story. And I’m intrigued by what just happened in this chapter

Also, i'm sorry someone spoiled you the movie.. I accidently did so too, with a friend, though she was rather thankful when we watched it together..

THANK YOU! So, did milli saw the future? since Thor's still on asgard, right? nice idea with wanda, i wonder if they could have really done this, intertwining their magic...

THANK YOU! So milli basically saw the future? since Thors still on asgard, right? and nice idea with wanda, i wonder if they could have really done this, intertwining their magic...