This is honestly the best story I have read on this site since I first visited it in January. I don't know how you did it but it's amazing, I just have one scruple, Sibyl is an undead so when he died he should have come back, now yes I know he wouldn't be back in Remnant he would probably be back in the chasm of the abyss at the last bonfire he rested at. And yes I know when you kil bosses in dark souls you gain their souls as a consumable item so I guess the same could be said for sibyl, but still great story I absolutely loved it!

Seriously amazing work here. There are many great fanfictions, but only a scarce few are ever finished. The fact that this story received an ending at all is commendable, and yet the writing was consistently good throughout.

Beautiful, absolutely beautiful

I can't read this anymore. I just can't. I do t like how he's just, rolling over. It's irritating. Good story though. Very well written.

Legendary story, I cried, it was so sad yet so epic and the epilogue takes pretty much all the bitterness from the bittersweet ending of the last chapter.

Jaune feels like he is where he just shouldnt be thats the thing. In my hero academia it feels like everyone else is an overachiever and deku is deadlast at the beginning, theres a difference. Its wouldnt be such a problem were it to happen on the huntsmen preparatory academies, you know, the ones where they actually learn how to fight.

Chosen undead don quijote moment, its quiet funny.

Well I expected Sibyl to die but it still made me sad. Good job on that piece of emotional writing. I very enjoyed reading this from start to finish, and am very happy it exists. Thank you for writing it.

I hope this eye of his doesnt become a shitty gimmic as i think it will.

Not much to say except: nice.

Dude no offence but have you checked how fucking strong the chosen undead are in any of the soul games?
Leaving aside some of the game mechanics and simply reading what the spells can do, you'll realize that the mc can dodge lightning point blank in combat.
Dragons that can wreck mountains? If he's strong enough to injure them with regular weapons, that means he is in a similar playing field.
Plus most of the time durability and strength go hand in hand.
The actual chosen undead would curb stomp most of the rwby cast so far.
You really should have used a beginner undead instead of endgame one imo.
The scenarios so far are making him and the awesome dark souls bosses look like chumps.

shame... it's just that the chosen undead is very nerfed in this story... i mean come on he battled gods and giant abominations

huh.

It was a great adventure , even if I just started reading it five days ago .
I have to say , great work , no that's not enough , it was , Breathtaking , the craftsmenship of this story is fantastic , I am sad it has to end , it always does .

We can hope there will be a sequel , but please take your time if you do make one , you already killed youself making this story I'm sure XD . Now i can only hope the best for you , take good care you are a good man/woman , I'm sure we can all agree on that.

I'm sure your story made others feel better in their darkest time , it did for me , and for that I and we have to thank you .

Now I will go , I already talked enough , now to everyone be safe , take care and have a good day or night , Farewell .

And for you Author "hats of to you" good bye .

Gotta say. This journey has been a great one. To not only feel alongside the characters, but to enjoy the entire thing the story makes up. No loose ties, no unsatisfying ending, and a story worth so much more than just a x-over fanfic. I can definitely see myself rereading this multiple times. Thank you.