Update please please

I’m so loving this story! It’s very clever! Please please update soon! PLEASE!

Legit I had to put my phone down for a moment because the way you wrote Bella and Renée’s relationship hit way too close to home for me. My mom was exactly like this, manipulative beyond a doubt and wild with her money and it drove me insane. Moving away from her was the hardest thing I ever did and yeah..you got me lol

I love your Bella. She’s hilarious xD

Nikki, por fa, continúa está historia, necesitamos saber quién es el enemigo, Alice? Carlisle? Demetri? Que hay de Tori? Logra escapar? Como sigue la vida de Bella y Jacob? Tantas preguntas y sólo tu puedes darnos las respuestas, no nos abandones en este punto, tienes historias increíbles, continúalas por favor. Muchas gracias

I think one of the only things I didn’t like about this fan fiction was that the everything was about money. From beginning to end. I think to make it a little more wistful money shouldn’t be mentioned at all. It really irritated me. But good writing! 3

By far one of the best stories ive read yet. I love that you made Victoria a main character and somewhat feel compassion towards humans especially Charlie. I really hope you continue this story. I would love to see what happens to the Cullens and Jake and Bella.

Will you please continue this story i love it and you cant just leave it there i beg of you finish this please oh god please finish this

89 chapters and bust! This story is amazing and I know it started as a one-shot but I sure hope you decide to finish it!

90. Chapter 90.
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Update this soon!

Oh my goodness. This is so good. Like are you going to continue?! I can't wait to see what you have in store.

Hi Nikki! I've spent some quality time catching up with all of your stories! I really hope you'll continue this, it is so good! I love that Victoria/Tori is one of the main characters here and that her character is multiple shades of grey. I'm wondering what - if anything - can become of her and Charlie's odd relationship but you'll think of something good, I know it. :) Bella's special golden blood is very intriguing, very unique scenario. Can't wait to find out about Alice and the others, what they are really about. Lots of excitement, please continue! Good job!

I love your stories! Really! I read them with enthusiasm, what talent you have. However, long stories, interesting, exciting, often you do not finish them and it's very sad

Nooo, don't let Tori for please. Hope to see more of this, absolutely love it.