Reviews for Forgiveness |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Ope. Looks like I left that last review on the wrong story; I meant to leave it on "Finding Home." |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my goodness! You're the writer of the Queen's Admiral, aren't you! Your "real-world" aesthetics inspired my "Frost and Iron." I can't believe I missed your earlier chapter updates! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You end it here? ARRRGH! It was very well done. Whatever you're doing, stop. Write for a living. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am amazed. Your story is intricate, has little 'action', but is amazingly compelling. I love it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn. This is some good writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’ve always wondered which time period in European history Arendelle would fit into. You have done something wonderful here, well-researched and in keeping with the characters despite the overarching universe. I can’t imagine the chaos engulfing small states like Arendelle and her neighbours as Europe realigns, and their huge neighbour to the east begins its inexorable push towards Paris. Please continue this project! |
![]() ![]() Really hope you continue with your sequel, i know its been over a year, but I'm really interested in how you manage elsa and the northern isles issue. |
![]() ![]() Really hope you continue with youemr sequel, i know its been over a year, but I'm really interested in how you manage elsa and the northern isles issue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh man I read this story in one day! Pleassseeee make a sequel. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was amazing. It gives me the chills to know things like evil schemes for power and such have taken the life of many people and you brought it perfectly in a frozen fanfic . It's the first time that I actually read a frozen fanfic so true to their era. I hope a sequel comes up soon you can't leave us here please |
![]() ![]() What an ending chapter! I loved how you wrote Anna and her realization of the impact her mistake had . Elsa kept her away from the castle, a good decision because even a very small mistake could make things so much worse. Plus the games at the court are so dangerous and grave. What a good thing, Tommy kept the letter of Hans. I can't believe it. Hans joining the swedish army, has destroyed any effort Elsa could make to bring him in Arendelle. I can't wait for the sequel, to see how this will be (?) sorted out. Your first part of the story was truly amazing and you did a wonderful work in writing historical events in the Frozen universe, analyzing the characters of the protagonists and creating a thrilling plot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() How are they going to help him now. And the damed inepts in Elsas court! I never really understand whats the mater with courts, what if a king or queen dont want them? Sorry rambling... A rwally good chapter, and wasnt expecting that. BUT IM REALLY WORRIED FOR THEM! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’ve missed this |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just finished the chapter and, girl, will you ever not leave me in a cliffhanger? I am glad though that I got to read Hans' letter. I thought that would be lost forever. and the history drama just gets better and better! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh hell yeah, you're back! I'm so glad, I look forward to reading this |