I remember when you first posted this! I was excited then and I'm still excited now lmao

I was with you in the story. I thought it was a bit of a cliche at first with the whole "Percy goes to the annabeth cheats in him and then his parents die" cliche that's over used but then you added in this whole soul family thing. I'll be honest as if now I can't get in board with it. I get it you want to make this a big harem but I don't think adding the guys into it was the right way to go by it. It just doesn't seem right. Bot that I'm against Percy being gay or whatever if you had made it all gay I would have been OK with it bug I just feel like this is going to be one of those "sex adventures" stories with a little plot in the side.

OH MY GODS! YOU UPDATED! I REMEMBER WHEN THIS CAME OUT AROUND 2017ish when I first started reading fanfic

long time mate, i will gladly wait as this is really good.

please write more

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I was crying reading this! So sad!

Alright, seeing as most people are probably frothing at the mouth because of Annabeth's choice to cheat (even though the reasoning was clearly given), I honestly hope you have an answer prepared to satisfy yourself and the readers. I'm happy with the story as is. After all, the plot has to move forward. But I can tell you with a whole certainty that this is well written and enjoyable so far. I'm not too big on the "relationship was ruined because of divine intervention/manipulation stories, but I'll accept it if the result is good enough. I just hope that you know what you're getting into with this story. After all, I've seen plenty of people imitate/reimagine another writer's work and fail miserably because they had no plan for the plot. In any regards, I wish you the best in this story and I look forward to see where you go from here.

Looking good

you better have a fucking better explanation why Annabeth cheated thanshe drank some stupid potion or they tricked her". Because if that happens and Percy forgives her like that,I'm angry. I really thought that the betrayal thing was really basic,sadly. I liked chapter 1&2,except the Minotaur fight. I think you forgot that Hades have Percy the curse of Styx again,cuz he got hurt. Also the fight was like,Percy got 10 stronger than in the book with all the blessings,but in the fight he was weaker than in the books..kinda weird. Everything else was really good in chapter 1&2...now to chapter 3. I didn't like chapter 3 that much. I guess you did a good job with it though .Through the whole chapter I kept wondering,what's gonna happen,is Annabeth cheating or not? That feeling was there the whole chapter,which made it exciting. Now,why I didn't like it? Because of the Situation at the end. The lemon..well,I guess it was just weird. I mean if you see your girlfriend cheating,you don't just stand there and wait till they finish,except you have some weird ass fetish, right?xd and afterwards,the conversation between Percy and Annabeth...I felt like it was wrong. They talked about so stupid stuff... Like it made no sense, as example in the End where Annabeth was likeno please stay with me I will even be your whore ..." that's not something you say when you try to get your partner to not break up,right xd? Anyways. Chapter 4 was good again. Kinda classic betrayal,but a bit unique with how Percy just walked into the room and tried to fuck Zeus and Ares up. You did a good job with that scene,because now we all hate those two gods and the moment Percy gets his revenge,it will be a very satisfying moment for all of us because of the story build up. The Aphrodite scene,a bit to rushed in my opinion. They talked about his soulmates,there are more,makes sense for a harem story,all good. BUT. then when they hugged,Percy said "I love you AphyI think it was like that) That just felt off. I don't see the connection between them all. Maybe try to have more scenes with them all. Of course they were friends for a year now,but we never even saw Percy and Aphrodite in a Solo scene,you get what I mean? It just feels rushed. It is probably very hard to not rush the relationships in a harem story,and I don't have any tips how you should do it,but to just not rush that Percy and Aphrodite. Artemis build up is already good,and Piper is Okay, and Aphrodite is also okay (I mean that I would be okay with them now in a relationship ,but I would not be able to connect to the relationship as good as with Percy and Annabeth in the start) And I hope you have something good with percy and
Annabeth. Good story. Sorry if this review was confusing,English isn't my main language,and I hope you understood what I meant with my review,because I really struggled writhing this in a good and understandable way xd

Percy would’ve not cared if she fucked his friends? Wtf? Why the hell is he thinking about how tight she is while watching her get fucked by his brother?

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So at this point I'm assuming that Annabeth wasn't in her right mind.

good shit homie

I'm guessing you'll be making it so that Annabeth was under some spell of Athena due to which she cheated or something?
Hopefully Ryan is dead though