I feel like your Gilgamesh is out of character. Gil may be a dick but at the end of the day he is still a hero, the only reason he acts the way he does in FSN is due to the grail corruptive influence. His personality in FZ is much more accurate.

I really don't think he would murder a girl in cold blood, If your Gilgamesh is still corrupted then I think you need to make this fact clearer in the narrative, if not then this does not work.

Gilgamesh is cooking?! What the actual hell lmao

To be honest, this is what I expected to occur once Gilgamesh found out about Salem. I agree that her motivations are pretty bad. If Taylor Hebert didn't break until her Brain was literally being eaten by her Shard then Salem should have desired to conquer Humanity instead of wiping it out.

The Gilgamesh of Fate/Stay Night claims to have not been corrupted by Angra Mainyu but that was only partially true. While Gilgamesh's body survived unscathed, his mind was another matter. After gaining a body from Angra Mainyu, Gilgamesh became FAR more arrogant and was quicker to behave in a far more ruthless manner than previously shown not to mention quicker to dismiss potential threats. The Consuming the Orphan's Souls and tearing out Illya's heart were previously things that he wouldn't have been so quick to do unless as a last resort because as he himself said in this fic, He had an image to maintain and behaving like an animal wouldn't have suited him. The only reason Gilgamesh lost to Shirou is because he was too arrogant to see him as a potential threat until it was too late.

The Maiden powers raise an interesting question. What if someone from a Different Series who was Immortal gained the Maiden's powers? Would they Always have them?

This is TOTALLY AWESOME! I agree that Cinder Fall is a shitty villain. She is far too smug and condescending for someone whose plans only worked because Ironwood was an idiot. I mean, seriously, The idiot is a General and yet it never occurred to him that his enemy would use Cyberwarfare on him especially when your main forces are robots? Cinder should have perished when Ruby used her Silver Eyes on her the first time.

The thought of someone having the power of ALL the Maidens seems like a fantastic idea as long as they aren't an idiot like Cinder.

Gilgamesh only uses Sha Nagba Imuru when he absolutely has to anyway. You didn't need to limit it. Gilgamesh sees using it as a hand out and his pride wouldn't let him. Gilgamesh is also someone who finds the unknown interesting and the thought of knowing everything to be boring. Keep in mind that Gilgamesh didn't even use Sha Nagba Imuru to find a way to save Enkidu. If he used it then his quest for Immortality would have never happened. Now if you wrote an SI with Access to ALL of Gilgamesh's abilities they would likely take full advantage of it. I could only see him using it to get basic info if he ends up in an entirely unknown location or if he is against someone with a similar ability in order to counter theirs. An example being, At the start of the story I could see him using it to learn about where he ended up and that's it.

Basically Miltia and Melanie's ovaries exploded, figuratively of course.

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Good luck at Basic! This story has been an interesting read.

I love this story! Good luck at Basic! I was wondering, will there be any main character deaths? It seems unlikely these Evolved that can take down train huntsmen would always lose to the RWBY heroes. I am sure eventually they will become better and win against them but in the beginning, I would be surprised if they all make it through without plot armor.

Be safe.

king gil is awesome in grand order

Good luck man.