Reviews for Sorceress: Civil War
kelsiecb chapter 13 . 12h
GAH I am absolutely screaming inside my head after this chapter! Like first of all I cannot BELIEVE she signed the accords, even if she’s trying to be a rule follower she had an agreement with the magical folks to show them anything and get their approval before she signed it! And then holy shit is their baby ok? Who the fuck has the baby? AGH. Thank you for writing!
kelsiecb chapter 9 . 13h
Hermione’s naivety about even considering that governments might have everyone’s best interests in mind is a little shocking. I’ve always felt that way about reading any Harry Potter fan fictions though, in the place of those characters I would probably never trust a government again after seeing how corrupt the ministry was (sending Sirius to prison without a trial, Fudge getting The dementors to give Barry Crouch the kiss without a trial, everything Umbridge did), and how easily they were overtaken and led astray and performed great harms on innocent people because of Voldemort and his followers. I would absolutely never even consider signing a document that would allow them to track me and take my (especially if it was magical) DNA. There are other ways to achieve the aims of oversight. Like get a board of directors put together or something! Gah! Ok rant over :)
kelsiecb chapter 2 . 15h
I can’t believe they didn’t bring Thor to speak at this trial! He would have been able to very clearly and honestly speak about the threats from other worlds, and about Hermione’s character!
KatieDevine chapter 10 . 8/16
Civil War was my least favorite of all the movies.
cshen.julienne chapter 14 . 7/15
Really awesome plot you have here
KnowInsight chapter 14 . 6/22
wow Hermione is far more broken then I thought if she's letting her fear make her decisions.
AntiCreator chapter 12 . 5/7
Rereading your brilliant series. You hadn't started Infinity War last time so excited to read that. I just wanted to ask. If you haven't already written it and if it's possible, please make Draco survive the snap (if it happens of course) so he can see how wrong he was about Thanos and the threat he poses.

I wanted to read this again because I was in a hp/Avengers crossover mood after reading a fantastic completed story called Post-Apocalyptic Potter from a Parallel Universe. Very different from yours with Harry as a protagonist and no magical world but it's very good. Anyway, look forward to rereading the rest of this and then a new story to get started on straight away. Cheers.
Mouse chapter 5 . 5/1
I'm thoroughly annoyed that you made her pregnant. Cheap plot device.
Misti D chapter 14 . 3/12
Hermione! For being so smart you can be quite dumb! Ugh. She needs to stay with her family. Looking forward to the next story. Happy writing.
dagitab ng sinagtala chapter 13 . 2/29
I know Hermione is magical and all but to travel, let alone stand right after giving birth? Oh well, this is still awesooome and sad huhu
dagitab ng sinagtala chapter 2 . 2/29
I'm a Dramione fan but to quote Tony, I really want to kick Draco's Ass!
Shinobi Gatana chapter 14 . 2/8
Well... crap. I don't like this hardened HR... Or at least I don't 'think' I do.
Shinobi Gatana chapter 1 . 2/8
I only see one problem with this chapter. When Harry was called up, he didn't use ANY of his titles. Lord Potter, Lord Black, Boy who lived etc. That would have carried a MASSIVE amount of weight and cut off Draco at the knees in some of his argument as Harry's fame, despite being years later would have held strong as Dumbledore's did I would think.
tigersmeleth chapter 14 . 1/29
Oh my God, this was more devastating than the Guardians one
Guest chapter 14 . 12/22/2019
Okay, this chapter from Natasha’s POV was heartbreaking, but it was my favorite so far! Hope there’s more Natasha POV in the future installments because you write her very well and believably!
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