Reviews for Fate Asterism Liner
JeepJoop711 chapter 19 . 9/6
Hiya again! You've got a knack for writing really good stories, especially surrounding the Fate series! Your subtle, yet helpful changes made to the Prisma Illyaverse have made the story incredibly fun to read, not to mention that we rarely see ships like Illya x OC, so it makes for a refreshing change of pace. I really hope you haven't decided to abandon this story, and look forward to seeing future updates, especially as we move into 3rei and onward!
Hashirama 1710 chapter 19 . 6/8
I wonder what he would be able to do in the lostbelts...
Guest chapter 19 . 5/31
For a future chapter have Caren approach eil at school and essentially force him to go on a date with her it's basically a situation where the only correct answer is yes because she won't release him from the cloth until he says yes
Guest chapter 19 . 5/30
For something later when caren shows off her exorcist outfit should have eil have a hard time looking away so his eyes keep getting drawn to the fact Caren isnt wearing any skirt which Caren specifically has to seduce men she notices eils wandering eyes and so bluntly asks if he wants to sleep with her in front of the others
Guest chapter 19 . 5/6
Yay Exposition Time Whatever That Is.
Mercurius Darkness chapter 17 . 4/23
how could McRemitz have the Archer card when Chloe IS the Archer card?
Mercurius Darkness chapter 9 . 4/23
i'd take that offer~
Wendel Santana chapter 19 . 1/17
Continue, pls!
Guest chapter 19 . 1/4
For when irisviel does her family hierarchy have her put kiritsugu below her and eil below Illya with shirou still being on the bottom
Guest chapter 19 . 11/21/2019
It's A Nice Fate Story Telling.
Guest chapter 19 . 10/25/2019
Now I Wonder What Illya's And Chloe's Parents Would Think About Eil.
ShugoYuuki123 chapter 19 . 10/16/2019
Hope you update soon :)
Dante chapter 19 . 8/31/2019
Oh I can’t wait for to see if Kerry gives the “So, your dating my daughter” Speech.
Guest chapter 19 . 8/23/2019
Eil's Car Ride Was Really Funny.
Rai24 chapter 19 . 8/23/2019
The badass himself has arrived, I’m really glad you brought Kiritsugu into the story. Although, it surprises me that Eil isn’t to nervous around Kiritsugu.

I really hope we get to see Kiritsugu in action, maybe some training with Eil? I mean his daughters have a thing for Eil, what better way to get to know each other.
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